Comment from K.L. Rockquemore

Excellent

This is a great flash!!
You were able to build tension slowly, with is hard to do in this genre.
You gave a sharp, unexpected twist , which every thriller should have.
Well done.

 Comment Written 17-May-2022

Comment from Theodore McDowell

Exceptional

Great flash fiction, A terrifying horrifying moment put concisely in a straightforward and that makes the ending even more of a terror film, with the patient hopelessly screaming in the end.

 Comment Written 15-May-2022

Comment from Carolyn Dooley

Excellent

This is scary. This would be my luck. The machine would go haywire, changing my gender and taking the wrong organ out. I enjoyed reading your post. It is funny and not funny. Have a great night.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is really surprising with a definite touch of horror. It seems we should really think a little more before we turn our surgeries over to computers. Best of luck in the flash fiction contest.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A very powerful story. I love the twist at the end. It is scary thinking this might actually happen in future. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 14-May-2022