Comment from Haylee Hemphill

Excellent

Hello!

This is such a great entry for the Friday the 13th! It is very fitting. I like the font color change at the end. It added the dramatic effect you find in a good piece. Thank you for sharing!

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Haylee

 Comment Written 13-May-2022

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reply by the author on 13-May-2022

Thank you, Haylee

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I thought this was very cute and funny! I like how you were going to lock yourselves in and stay safe, then came out as zombies. There is no safe Friday 13th! Thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 13-May-2022

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reply by the author on 13-May-2022

Thank you, Jessizero

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I suppose because the 13th had something to do with the zombie apocalypse? I haven't watched any zombie movies but I think brains are involved. Fun poem! Hope you do well in the contest!

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 Comment Written 13-May-2022

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reply by the author on 13-May-2022

Thank you, Helen.