When sadness comes
Finding the light in the darkness11 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
You've expressed a lot of pain in your poem. There's a nice rhyme, which seems to contradict the sadness, or maybe balances it for the reader. Nicely written, good luck with the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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You've expressed a lot of pain in your poem. There's a nice rhyme, which seems to contradict the sadness, or maybe balances it for the reader. Nicely written, good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you
