When sadness comes
Finding the light in the darkness11 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, Good descriptive writing and a very personal look into the struggles of mental health illness. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear.
Of special note:
Let joy replace the pain and create happy memories that last.
(The above is my prayer for your.)
Today you wrote something brave. Thank you for sharing this with your FS family. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Hello author, Good descriptive writing and a very personal look into the struggles of mental health illness. Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear.
Of special note:
Let joy replace the pain and create happy memories that last.
(The above is my prayer for your.)
Today you wrote something brave. Thank you for sharing this with your FS family. Keep the blue waters flowing.
LateBloomer
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you for your kind review
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Mental illness no longer has a stigma as most people suffer from sorrow at some stage in their life and know what grieving feels like, some suffer more often than others. Your poem tells of your depression and anxiety and I am glad to hear you fight it with all your might, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Mental illness no longer has a stigma as most people suffer from sorrow at some stage in their life and know what grieving feels like, some suffer more often than others. Your poem tells of your depression and anxiety and I am glad to hear you fight it with all your might, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you so much Dolly 🙂
Comment from jessizero
I am impressed at your will to survive. I have struggled with mental illness as long as I can remember, and that will to live is weak sometimes. Thank you for sharing, and hang in there. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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I am impressed at your will to survive. I have struggled with mental illness as long as I can remember, and that will to live is weak sometimes. Thank you for sharing, and hang in there. Best wishes.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you yes it?s very difficult you hang in there as well.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Oh man, you said it. If it were not for having to relive those sad, sad, moments of my past I would be a very happy go lucky kind of guy. But the past never seems to leave us, it is always there. If only......
Nicely said.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Oh man, you said it. If it were not for having to relive those sad, sad, moments of my past I would be a very happy go lucky kind of guy. But the past never seems to leave us, it is always there. If only......
Nicely said.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you
Comment from harmony13
I found the author's words expressing feelings, sadness, and memories well. I found the poem thought provoking and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment this poem. The artwork goes well with these words.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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I found the author's words expressing feelings, sadness, and memories well. I found the poem thought provoking and creative. I pondered on the theme of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes - they compliment this poem. The artwork goes well with these words.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thanks so much
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hello Dear Poet, Your heartrending poem has very
much touched my psyche. I
suffer from depression too.
I had my first major depression over 30 years ago.
Please know you will be in my
prayers. Blessings to you ~
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hello Dear Poet, Your heartrending poem has very
much touched my psyche. I
suffer from depression too.
I had my first major depression over 30 years ago.
Please know you will be in my
prayers. Blessings to you ~
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you sorry to hear that I know a lot of people that suffer with depression so sad.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
I enjoyed reading your poem and the graphic selected fits well. However, I wish you had layered more flesh on the bones of this poem by giving detailed examples of some of your hardships and struggles. You state pains of a trouble past but give no sensory details showing it. I feel more details would make this piece richer.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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I enjoyed reading your poem and the graphic selected fits well. However, I wish you had layered more flesh on the bones of this poem by giving detailed examples of some of your hardships and struggles. You state pains of a trouble past but give no sensory details showing it. I feel more details would make this piece richer.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thanks it would have been a very long poem if I described all the details . I was just looking for the gest of sadness. Thanks so much.
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Nothing wrong with a long poem. The extra details may touch the soul of another and be exactly what they need to keep pushing forward. Thanks!
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Ok
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
I love this piece, though it is sadly relatable. You did a great job with your word choices. I would only suggest fixing your capitalization with your "i's." Thank you for sharing!
One Love
Haylee
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reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hello!
I love this piece, though it is sadly relatable. You did a great job with your word choices. I would only suggest fixing your capitalization with your "i's." Thank you for sharing!
One Love
Haylee
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thanks
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Hello, this is a raw and heartwrenching account of a struggle that affects far too many people. Thank you for sharing. I know other readers will find comfort in the fact that they are not alone with feeling like this.
Take care,
Erika
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hello, this is a raw and heartwrenching account of a struggle that affects far too many people. Thank you for sharing. I know other readers will find comfort in the fact that they are not alone with feeling like this.
Take care,
Erika
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I'm so sorry for the sadness that plagues you so often. I hope perhaps some days will become less of a struggle than others, as time goes on. I love that as well as sadness, this poem also talks about your love of life and people, and seeing the light during painful times. You might feel all the sadness, but I think that's a message of hope.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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I'm so sorry for the sadness that plagues you so often. I hope perhaps some days will become less of a struggle than others, as time goes on. I love that as well as sadness, this poem also talks about your love of life and people, and seeing the light during painful times. You might feel all the sadness, but I think that's a message of hope.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you
