Only One
There was only one Prince Charming28 total reviews
Comment from Sarah Tummey
These minute poems are a challenge to get the rhymes and the syllable count right. I only learnt yesterday they had a rhyming scheme. You've done it perfectly though.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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These minute poems are a challenge to get the rhymes and the syllable count right. I only learnt yesterday they had a rhyming scheme. You've done it perfectly though.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Sarah, thank you!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Beautiful artwork.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme
that tell a story.
-You establish the premise in verse one.
-You show how things aren't going too
well in verse two.
-Finally, there was a meeting of the minds,
and there was only one for her!
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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-Beautiful artwork.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-A good topic, effective imagery, and rhyme
that tell a story.
-You establish the premise in verse one.
-You show how things aren't going too
well in verse two.
-Finally, there was a meeting of the minds,
and there was only one for her!
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hi Pam! Thanks, as always for your review and comments. Have a splendid weekend :)
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You are welcome, and have a good weekend, too.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Clever use of the Minute format to help the rhythm of this. I like the transition from agitation to acceptance, from trepidation to comfort. Very nicely written.
Mike
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Clever use of the Minute format to help the rhythm of this. I like the transition from agitation to acceptance, from trepidation to comfort. Very nicely written.
Mike
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you, Mike!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Only One', is a well-written and extremely descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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'Only One', is a well-written and extremely descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet has told it as it is. Good luck with the contest. My fingers are crossed for you!
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Duchess, thank you for the validation and good wishes.
My friend as always you're very welcome.
Bless you, the Duchess
Comment from lyenochka
This Minute poem seems to describe a rather complicated relationship as there is "dread" and "constrained emotions drained." But in the end there was success with the mate whose fate "came late." So I think there was a happy ending. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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This Minute poem seems to describe a rather complicated relationship as there is "dread" and "constrained emotions drained." But in the end there was success with the mate whose fate "came late." So I think there was a happy ending. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Yes, good ending as all relationships should become.
Comment from nomi338
It is not difficult to be bold and daring when your future is ordained. I mean you are Prince Charming for crying out loud. What else are you going to do besides rescue the princess, release her from this terrible curse, marry her and live happily ever after.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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It is not difficult to be bold and daring when your future is ordained. I mean you are Prince Charming for crying out loud. What else are you going to do besides rescue the princess, release her from this terrible curse, marry her and live happily ever after.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hello friend, I have never met, a good ending as all relationships should become with faith as the cornerstone.
Comment from John Ciarmello
This one has my vote so far. I loved the way it read, and the content of the princess and the prince just made it all worthwhile for me. It was a well-put-together minute poem.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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This one has my vote so far. I loved the way it read, and the content of the princess and the prince just made it all worthwhile for me. It was a well-put-together minute poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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John, thank you for the validation, these are not easy to create.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An unusual and unique minute poem and I enjoyed the sentiment. Lines 5 and 6 is are of metre, and the contest states (strict iambic metre) so I suggest you make a change, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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An unusual and unique minute poem and I enjoyed the sentiment. Lines 5 and 6 is are of metre, and the contest states (strict iambic metre) so I suggest you make a change, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you as always, Dolly!
Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem about the one was well done in the form on a minute poem, not an easy form to follow. It expressed the search and success of the woman in an easy flow. The picture was complimentary. Good job.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Your poem about the one was well done in the form on a minute poem, not an easy form to follow. It expressed the search and success of the woman in an easy flow. The picture was complimentary. Good job.
Cecilia
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Cecilia, thank you!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I liked the picture, and you met the requirements demanded you, crossing t's and dotting i's however if Prince Charming is herein I have yet to recognize what he had supposedly done.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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I liked the picture, and you met the requirements demanded you, crossing t's and dotting i's however if Prince Charming is herein I have yet to recognize what he had supposedly done.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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HI Tom, guess he just survived all odds.
