Until We Meet Again
Minute Poetry contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Perfection. All syllables in the right place at the right time and in the correct rhyming pattern. Not an easy thing to do with so few lines and syllables available.
I like it, sounds promising.
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Perfection. All syllables in the right place at the right time and in the correct rhyming pattern. Not an easy thing to do with so few lines and syllables available.
I like it, sounds promising.
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Gary. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic
of honoring those who we have lost.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, like
"where angels fly" and
"each precious word,
and verse shall rhyme."
-A very good concluding verse.
-A very good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-A well written poem with a good topic
of honoring those who we have lost.
-Effective imagery and rhyme, like
"where angels fly" and
"each precious word,
and verse shall rhyme."
-A very good concluding verse.
-A very good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Pam. I actually created this picture myself with my art program. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
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You are very welcome. Thanks for sharing about the art. It was really good. Maybe you will share more of your art. I look forward to seeing who you are! You have a great upcoming weekend, too.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Ah, the candle burning ever bright, a light reminding us to fight to furnish every word we think upon a poem in a blink upon this electronic eye we back up in a clouded sky of electricity and hope - Fanstory's world or wordy rope.
Very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Ah, the candle burning ever bright, a light reminding us to fight to furnish every word we think upon a poem in a blink upon this electronic eye we back up in a clouded sky of electricity and hope - Fanstory's world or wordy rope.
Very much enjoyed :-)
Mike
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you for the awesome review, Mike. Yes, that's about what it boils down to. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
