War Commemoration
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
My husband is buried at Fort Custer in Augusta, Michigan, near Battle Creek, Michigan. It is a lovely place. His gravesite as all the others are kept up. It is a beautiful place to be buried. Flags line the entrance. Deer and birds roam. Thank you for the great poem.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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My husband is buried at Fort Custer in Augusta, Michigan, near Battle Creek, Michigan. It is a lovely place. His gravesite as all the others are kept up. It is a beautiful place to be buried. Flags line the entrance. Deer and birds roam. Thank you for the great poem.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you and you're welcome!
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Back to you. Have a great day.
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent entry for the minute contest
with correct syllables and rhymes.
The iambic meter is off, but that is not usually enforced.
IT should read da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM (Even syllables are stressed)
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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This is an excellent entry for the minute contest
with correct syllables and rhymes.
The iambic meter is off, but that is not usually enforced.
IT should read da DUM da DUM da DUM da DUM (Even syllables are stressed)
Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you!
