Life Lessons Learned Run Deep
The best things my parents taught me32 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a replay of the popular Bible saying, which states that, "train up a child in the way he should go and when he is grown up, he will not depart from it."
The work highlights the protagonist's alignment with this saying: at home, at school and at work and how it dovetailed him to be the person he endeared himself to be.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes synonymous with
good parental upbringing as a sine qua non for raising a disciplined man.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a replay of the popular Bible saying, which states that, "train up a child in the way he should go and when he is grown up, he will not depart from it."
The work highlights the protagonist's alignment with this saying: at home, at school and at work and how it dovetailed him to be the person he endeared himself to be.
The work earns its texture through its effective use anecdotes synonymous with
good parental upbringing as a sine qua non for raising a disciplined man.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Mystery writer a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your story about the things your parents taught you it was well written. The thing that stuck out the most for me was the advice about common sense. There seems to be a serious shortage of that these days. Two things I learned in my 45 years is that you can fix stupid and you can't teach common sense. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Hello Mystery writer a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. I liked your story about the things your parents taught you it was well written. The thing that stuck out the most for me was the advice about common sense. There seems to be a serious shortage of that these days. Two things I learned in my 45 years is that you can fix stupid and you can't teach common sense. Good job and good luck in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story.
