Who's To Judge
One Line Story contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
So, you idiot, were you the only one there at the time? It would still be true if you were surrounded by others.
I like the humour of your piece - too many people (idiots) take themselves too seriously.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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So, you idiot, were you the only one there at the time? It would still be true if you were surrounded by others.
I like the humour of your piece - too many people (idiots) take themselves too seriously.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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That's for sure, Lisa. Yeah, being tired and sick, that's what I came up with. I couldn't figure out a more humorous ending to try to make it a whole story within the one line parameters. Lol We all talk to ourselves in our head so I just went that ridiculous route. Ha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Lisa.
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Comment from R56Ma3
Well dang! That's just the way I feel, but first, I take a look at myself and say, I'm not that perfect, but at least I don't commit crimes against others, and do the best to obey traffic laws. Yea, I may have my off days. Great work and best in the contest. R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Well dang! That's just the way I feel, but first, I take a look at myself and say, I'm not that perfect, but at least I don't commit crimes against others, and do the best to obey traffic laws. Yea, I may have my off days. Great work and best in the contest. R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Susan. Yes, I figure we can only accept people as they are as long as they're not hurting me. Lol. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
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You're welcome
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
You said a mouth full. A few words speak volumes. We are not supposed to judge, however,
'it is what it is.'
The world is full of idiots. Sad, but true. Without a computer or calculator, they are lost.
For instance, they have no idea how to make change at gas stations or fast food restaurants. Without the computer screen, they are lost. Thank you for spreading awareness of today.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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You said a mouth full. A few words speak volumes. We are not supposed to judge, however,
'it is what it is.'
The world is full of idiots. Sad, but true. Without a computer or calculator, they are lost.
For instance, they have no idea how to make change at gas stations or fast food restaurants. Without the computer screen, they are lost. Thank you for spreading awareness of today.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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I know. How did a lot of these people get through school? Phones and computers have made the world dumb. Lol. Thank you for the great review and stars, Carolyn.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Eliz T.
I don't really know how long a one line poem ought to be, but I definitely appreciate the humor in this piece. It made me laugh out loud to myself. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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I don't really know how long a one line poem ought to be, but I definitely appreciate the humor in this piece. It made me laugh out loud to myself. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Eliz. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. That's all I was really going for.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
You know, of course, that agreeing with yourself makes you one of the idiots. Although I have felt like saying that same thing many times; because it's true.
Interesting thought.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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You know, of course, that agreeing with yourself makes you one of the idiots. Although I have felt like saying that same thing many times; because it's true.
Interesting thought.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Lol. Yep, we all agree with ourselves on that matter. Haha. Thank you for the great review and stars, Gary. Have yourself a great day.
