Comment from GARY MACLEAN

Excellent

I hope the picture is of the person and their partner who wrote this one sentence truth. I can see the happiness and satisfaction in their faces. I feel the same way with my wife. Your words ring true, but I fear, not for all.

Good thoughts. Thanks.

 Comment Written 14-May-2022

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reply by the author on 14-May-2022

Thank you so much Gary. I'm do pleased you are happy.

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

This is a neat entry for the contest. Love is always grand and a love that lasts for the ages is especially grand. *smile* I don't know that I absolutely believe in love at first sight - but I do know that the first time I saw the man who became my husband I felt a certain something that I cannot explain. Weird, weird, weird. ha

Thanks!

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks Robyn. X

Comment from BlueTiger

Excellent

Good work on this poem; these one-liners can be difficult to work with, and I liked that it rhymes. Good choice of photograph to go along with it as well. Best of luck on the contest,
-BT

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Many thanks