Forget Me Not
A walk down memory lane could be good or bad.3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Reminiscing of a better, maybe more desirable past. We all do it and now you have declared it. I have a little problem with the usage of the word 'spilth' in the 7th line. I think, perhaps, a more familiar word (growing, spreading, tangling) whatever, may better serve the poem. But your efforts still command a five rating. Thanks.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Reminiscing of a better, maybe more desirable past. We all do it and now you have declared it. I have a little problem with the usage of the word 'spilth' in the 7th line. I think, perhaps, a more familiar word (growing, spreading, tangling) whatever, may better serve the poem. But your efforts still command a five rating. Thanks.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for your generous stars and for your kind review of my poem.
Comment from Pantygynt
The selected words are used to good advantage in this poem but I think you have a mistake in the title 'Forge Me Not'! While no one would enjoy being hammered out upon an anvil, I think you meant 'Forget Me Not'.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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The selected words are used to good advantage in this poem but I think you have a mistake in the title 'Forge Me Not'! While no one would enjoy being hammered out upon an anvil, I think you meant 'Forget Me Not'.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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OMG! You're correct. It should be Forget...not Forge. My fingers move faster than my brain sometimes. Thanks.
Oh, and thank you for your generous rating.
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I suffer from something similar on occasions.
Comment from Kim Kinakin Tuckey
I absolutely loved this poem. Wonderful use of the four prompt words. I loved the line - gleaming sharp and crude. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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I absolutely loved this poem. Wonderful use of the four prompt words. I loved the line - gleaming sharp and crude. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you for so many wonderful stars and thank you for your review of my my work.