One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
A beautiful poem with comforting words for those who have lost a mom .
The presentation and your words are so elegant, sad, and beautiful.
I had to give a six stars.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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A beautiful poem with comforting words for those who have lost a mom .
The presentation and your words are so elegant, sad, and beautiful.
I had to give a six stars.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate your six stars and exceptional review. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sweet words and I am hoping for the same as I have been as large as life in both my daughters' hearts, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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These are sweet words and I am hoping for the same as I have been as large as life in both my daughters' hearts, a fine post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem, and also for the helpful feedback.
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautifully composed poem, Gypsy. I love the
use of colored fonts, the picture, the formatting of the
lines, and your message. Your lines flow smoothly with
great imagery. I love the sentiment of the ending.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This is a beautifully composed poem, Gypsy. I love the
use of colored fonts, the picture, the formatting of the
lines, and your message. Your lines flow smoothly with
great imagery. I love the sentiment of the ending.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from dragonpoet
Gypsy,
This could be both about before and after death. It could be after death with the soul reflecting that the ashes that they scatter will be returned to them in the future elements of nature and that she will always be alive in the hearts of her living loved ones.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Gypsy,
This could be both about before and after death. It could be after death with the soul reflecting that the ashes that they scatter will be returned to them in the future elements of nature and that she will always be alive in the hearts of her living loved ones.
Keep writng and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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You are most kindly welcome, Gypsy.
Joan
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a hopeful one. It's true, all we'll have to mark our passage though reality's realm is the memories of others , for good or bad.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and a hopeful one. It's true, all we'll have to mark our passage though reality's realm is the memories of others , for good or bad.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from C2
GBR,
I love your poem--the eternality of it. During the pandemic I read Japanese Death Poems by Yoel Hoffman. Very interesting. Had never heard about this concept.
For some reason your poem reminds me of an Avett Brothers song, No Hard Feelings. 'Where will I go? Through Georgia grains, tropical rains or snow from the heavens."
Thanks for sharing it
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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GBR,
I love your poem--the eternality of it. During the pandemic I read Japanese Death Poems by Yoel Hoffman. Very interesting. Had never heard about this concept.
For some reason your poem reminds me of an Avett Brothers song, No Hard Feelings. 'Where will I go? Through Georgia grains, tropical rains or snow from the heavens."
Thanks for sharing it
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from JoannaN
This poem is very elegant. It is both sad and pensive, and cheerful. Apart from the content, I appreciate the graphical presentation, it was a good idea to play with colours.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This poem is very elegant. It is both sad and pensive, and cheerful. Apart from the content, I appreciate the graphical presentation, it was a good idea to play with colours.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from robyn corum
M.,
How lovely! Tragic, sad, heart-breaking -- but truly lovely. And kinda appropriate, too, here at Mother's Day. To be thinking about how your remains will linger with your children... I haven't seen this form before. But I like it quite a lot. As always, I adore the presentation. Beautiful!
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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M.,
How lovely! Tragic, sad, heart-breaking -- but truly lovely. And kinda appropriate, too, here at Mother's Day. To be thinking about how your remains will linger with your children... I haven't seen this form before. But I like it quite a lot. As always, I adore the presentation. Beautiful!
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
This is a lovely use of a metaphor to paint a complete word picture. Death is so often a dark and sad subject, hidden in words of anticipation of the hereafter. Your words do neither, but speak a quiet truth.
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This is a lovely use of a metaphor to paint a complete word picture. Death is so often a dark and sad subject, hidden in words of anticipation of the hereafter. Your words do neither, but speak a quiet truth.
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars. I appreciate your feedback.
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is lovely, Gypsy. I love the thought of the ashes across oceans and seas. Your descriptions of where descendants would feel and sense you are really looking. Beautifully presented, cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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This is lovely, Gypsy. I love the thought of the ashes across oceans and seas. Your descriptions of where descendants would feel and sense you are really looking. Beautifully presented, cheers
Valda
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.
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