Another Second Chance
Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Annmuma
Indeed, life is a series of second chances!!!! If it were not, we would all be out of luck. I love your story and feel the love you have for your parents Good luck in the contest. ann
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Indeed, life is a series of second chances!!!! If it were not, we would all be out of luck. I love your story and feel the love you have for your parents Good luck in the contest. ann
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Sounds like very attentive, loving parents.
6th line: Should be a 'comma' between 'so' and 'I'
15th line: Should be a 'comma' between 'so' and 'I'
Avery nice story with a sound message 'listen to Mom and Dad!'
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Sounds like very attentive, loving parents.
6th line: Should be a 'comma' between 'so' and 'I'
15th line: Should be a 'comma' between 'so' and 'I'
Avery nice story with a sound message 'listen to Mom and Dad!'
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you, I have fixed it!
Comment from Regina Elliott
Fab writing here. You're certainly a real good writer.
Onward and Upward, the past
is in the past. Many people
can benefit from parents like
yours. My very best wishes
for the contest. ~
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Fab writing here. You're certainly a real good writer.
Onward and Upward, the past
is in the past. Many people
can benefit from parents like
yours. My very best wishes
for the contest. ~
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
I am so pleased for you that you have wonderfully supportive parents and you have been encouraged into a life that makes you happy. Your gratitude to them is sincere and heartfelt. Your story is a good example of making lemonade out of lemons. Parents are so influential - for good as well as bad - so we must pay attention to their wise counsel and focus on the present to make a successful future.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I am so pleased for you that you have wonderfully supportive parents and you have been encouraged into a life that makes you happy. Your gratitude to them is sincere and heartfelt. Your story is a good example of making lemonade out of lemons. Parents are so influential - for good as well as bad - so we must pay attention to their wise counsel and focus on the present to make a successful future.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from John Ciarmello
It seems your parents are wise people. You're right it is the downfall of many young people today that they can do it all on their own. Past successes have shown that no one climbs their ladder alone. Accept the help and always learn from it.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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It seems your parents are wise people. You're right it is the downfall of many young people today that they can do it all on their own. Past successes have shown that no one climbs their ladder alone. Accept the help and always learn from it.
Comment Written 10-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thank you!