Wedding Night
5-7-5 passion3 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
What can you say bad about passion and love? I am sure the picture portrays your parents as they must have been so many (?) years ago. Thanks for the glimpse into your emotions.
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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What can you say bad about passion and love? I am sure the picture portrays your parents as they must have been so many (?) years ago. Thanks for the glimpse into your emotions.
Comment Written 12-May-2022
reply by the author on 12-May-2022
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Dear Gary, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Matt Schur
I love the phrasing of "virginity is aroused." The whole thing is a great description of the physical expression of love, particularly with newlyweds as you said in your description. Well done with a limited number of syllables!
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I love the phrasing of "virginity is aroused." The whole thing is a great description of the physical expression of love, particularly with newlyweds as you said in your description. Well done with a limited number of syllables!
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Dear Matt, thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
This is a beautiful picture. The dress is lovely. And I am sure the honeymoon was full of bliss. I enjoy reading your poem. It is amazing how a few words can tell such a unique story. I wish you luck in the contest. Have a great evening.
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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This is a beautiful picture. The dress is lovely. And I am sure the honeymoon was full of bliss. I enjoy reading your poem. It is amazing how a few words can tell such a unique story. I wish you luck in the contest. Have a great evening.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
reply by the author on 09-May-2022
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Dear Carolyn, thank you for your comments, review and good luck wishes
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You are welcome.
