One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from tfawcus
I find myself whitewater rafting over the cleverly designed undulations in your presentation of this! Life can be a turbulent ride! I like the sense of your poem, with the body fastened to the river of life, but when it reaches the sea, that is only one stage in the journey of the soul.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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I find myself whitewater rafting over the cleverly designed undulations in your presentation of this! Life can be a turbulent ride! I like the sense of your poem, with the body fastened to the river of life, but when it reaches the sea, that is only one stage in the journey of the soul.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you, Tony. Your opinion and review mean a lot to me. I am grateful for your exceptional feedback and your kind words. The six stars are topping on the cake. Thank you!
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Comment from karenina
Wow! Talk about poetry in motion! Your words are undulating and it's a mystical experience! I have missed a LOT of your posts and will not be able to catch up tonight...but I'm going to have a GYPSY party soon and FEAST! -- I believe in this philosophy--- I just could never say it as elegantly as you!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Wow! Talk about poetry in motion! Your words are undulating and it's a mystical experience! I have missed a LOT of your posts and will not be able to catch up tonight...but I'm going to have a GYPSY party soon and FEAST! -- I believe in this philosophy--- I just could never say it as elegantly as you!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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LoL I love the "gypsy party" Gypsies know how to party. Thank you for reading all my poems, you are very kind. I appreciate you catching up with all my postings. Thank you, Karenina!
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Not ALL...but a chunk!
Delightful treat for me!
Comment from Gert sherwood
6/6/5 Jisei Haiku
Fasten to Symphony
Gypsy Blue Rose, as I was reading your Jisei haiku gave me a feeling of death when I read how in your words of how life stops moving on and death ends the journey.
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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6/6/5 Jisei Haiku
Fasten to Symphony
Gypsy Blue Rose, as I was reading your Jisei haiku gave me a feeling of death when I read how in your words of how life stops moving on and death ends the journey.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Gert. Your kind review is precious to me. I am grateful for your feedback, my friend. Thank you!
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome Gypsy Blue
Gert
Comment from lyenochka
I like the movement of the rushing river of life and that the "soul moves on" - it could be moving to the rhythm of life. It could also be that the soul is moving to beyond this life.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I like the movement of the rushing river of life and that the "soul moves on" - it could be moving to the rhythm of life. It could also be that the soul is moving to beyond this life.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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yes, you're right :) Thank you very much, Helen. I hope you are having a restful and fun weekend. Early happy mother's day!
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Comment from aryr
This was indeed a beautiful Jisei Poem, Gypsy. I could almost hear the pulse of the water of the river. It truly does become a symphony that moves one's soul. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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This was indeed a beautiful Jisei Poem, Gypsy. I could almost hear the pulse of the water of the river. It truly does become a symphony that moves one's soul. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate your kind review and feedback. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
:) hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy, blessed be n hugs!
Comment from jessizero
I absolutely love the formatting on your poem so that it flows like the river. You also chose your words well. Your poetry never fails to amaze me. Thank you again for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I absolutely love the formatting on your poem so that it flows like the river. You also chose your words well. Your poetry never fails to amaze me. Thank you again for sharing.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you, Jessi, I appreciate your kind review and feedback. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
:) hugs
Comment from royowen
That's indeed a philosophy in the biblical reference to death, "Death where is your sting, grave where is your victory?" A beautiful written haiku my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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That's indeed a philosophy in the biblical reference to death, "Death where is your sting, grave where is your victory?" A beautiful written haiku my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you, Roy, I appreciate your kind review and feedback. I hope you are having a wonderful weekend.
:) hugs
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Most welcome