She Don't Live Here Anymore
aabb- love story65 total reviews
Comment from joycetreasures
Jaybird,
This is such a lovely poem with so much feelings in your words. It really touched my heart. You could feel the loss of your wife; someone you adored and miss. Excellent piece. Nice structure and flow. Well done!!
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Jaybird,
This is such a lovely poem with so much feelings in your words. It really touched my heart. You could feel the loss of your wife; someone you adored and miss. Excellent piece. Nice structure and flow. Well done!!
Comment Written 12-May-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello Jaybird1 a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. I'm glad that you're still gracing FanStory with your presence and your beautiful words of wisdom. That was a beautiful ode to your late wife. Great job and have a great day!
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Hello Jaybird1 a marvelous Monday to you. I hope this finds you well. I'm glad that you're still gracing FanStory with your presence and your beautiful words of wisdom. That was a beautiful ode to your late wife. Great job and have a great day!
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from Laurie Holding
Gut wrenching and beautifully crafted. This could be a song, and for some reason I'm hearing Glen Campbell singing it. Thank you so much for sharing your life with me today, Jaybird. I wish you luck, love, and a sunny day.
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Gut wrenching and beautifully crafted. This could be a song, and for some reason I'm hearing Glen Campbell singing it. Thank you so much for sharing your life with me today, Jaybird. I wish you luck, love, and a sunny day.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from Ja Majal
I almost broke down in tears while reading this, not to mention I'm listening to Claire De Lune after my last review! Your wife appears to be very precious to you and I am very sorry for you loss, but as they say
poets make the objects of their affection immortal and so she lives on through your writings.
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I almost broke down in tears while reading this, not to mention I'm listening to Claire De Lune after my last review! Your wife appears to be very precious to you and I am very sorry for you loss, but as they say
poets make the objects of their affection immortal and so she lives on through your writings.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, She Don't Live Here Anymore, is well-presented with meter and rhyme. The subject matter, of course, is heart-wrenching as those of us with spouses, and closer to one end than the other, can relate to this sad thought.
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This poem, She Don't Live Here Anymore, is well-presented with meter and rhyme. The subject matter, of course, is heart-wrenching as those of us with spouses, and closer to one end than the other, can relate to this sad thought.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from Jessica Minder
Just by the title I had already known this would be a woeful poem. While I was reading it, I could feel it in my heart. It is beautiful as it is sad. I think it is wonderful. I absolutely love to read poetry that provokes feelings while I read it. Great job. Keep writing and sharing.
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Just by the title I had already known this would be a woeful poem. While I was reading it, I could feel it in my heart. It is beautiful as it is sad. I think it is wonderful. I absolutely love to read poetry that provokes feelings while I read it. Great job. Keep writing and sharing.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
very heartfelt poem about your love of your life and what she meant to you. You lost comes through the poem. I admire people who can write formal verse as well as you do.
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very heartfelt poem about your love of your life and what she meant to you. You lost comes through the poem. I admire people who can write formal verse as well as you do.
Comment Written 09-May-2022
Comment from Steve L. Siegel
Awesome, sorry about your lost, I know i still feel the lost of mother, because i always shared so much with her. I guess because it is mothers day I am feeling it bit more today. your poem helped me Thank you for sharing it with us.
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Awesome, sorry about your lost, I know i still feel the lost of mother, because i always shared so much with her. I guess because it is mothers day I am feeling it bit more today. your poem helped me Thank you for sharing it with us.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
Comment from Paul McFarland
A nice tribute to your departed wife. My wife is struggling with cancer, and I pray that she will be okay. I can't imagine what it is like for you. I hope I don't find out.
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A nice tribute to your departed wife. My wife is struggling with cancer, and I pray that she will be okay. I can't imagine what it is like for you. I hope I don't find out.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing your note and poem, jaybird.
-You wrote a very good poem for your wife.
-You have many good images like
"The golden thoughts on life we shared."
-You show the impact on your life as she
is "up in Heaven's shore."
-A very good concluding verse.
-Have a good rest of your day
and the upcoming week, too.
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-Thanks for sharing your note and poem, jaybird.
-You wrote a very good poem for your wife.
-You have many good images like
"The golden thoughts on life we shared."
-You show the impact on your life as she
is "up in Heaven's shore."
-A very good concluding verse.
-Have a good rest of your day
and the upcoming week, too.
Comment Written 08-May-2022
