Comment from Richard Melnick

Excellent

Very nice. Sometimes you just can't hide your love away. Very sweet and full of passion. Excellent 5-7-5, and an excellent poem regardless of structure.

 Comment Written 16-May-2022

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reply by the author on 16-May-2022

Thank you for the great review and the generous stars, Richard. I'm glad you liked the piece.

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

It is said that God made everything, including, it would seem, double standards. David was a case in point and all puritans should take careful note as Uriah the Hittite found to his cost.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

I'll have to look that up, friend. Uriah doesn't ring a bell. Thank you for the great review and the generous stars, Pantygynt.

reply by Pantygynt on 06-May-2022

David ordered him placed at the forefront of the battle so he would be killed and David could run off with Uriah's wife, Bathsheba

reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Duh, I'm an idiot. Lol. Okay.

Yes, what's up with all that? Haha

Thanks again, Pantygynt.

Comment from the13thpoet

Excellent

Hello mystery poet a Good day to you, I hope this finds you well. I liked your 5-7-5 romance contest entry, you executed it well on the syllable count. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

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reply by the author on 06-May-2022

Thank you for the great review and stars, 13. I hope this reply finds you well.