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Her Face

She fills my deepest desires.

3 total reviews 
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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The alliteration of the repetition of the t's and s's enhance the message. The t's almost give the 'tut' tut' tut' no touch...she's mine. And the s's effect the silence of the moment.

 Comment Written 07-May-2022

reply by the author on 07-May-2022
    Thank you, Liz, for the read and the encouraging review.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 08-May-2022
    ***smile***
reply by Liz O'Neill on 08-May-2022
    ***smile***
Comment from jessizero
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Your 5-7-5 poem was definitely romantic. More than that, it was sweet and loving. I am glad you found your forever love and that you wrote about it here. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

reply by the author on 06-May-2022
    Me too. It took two tries. But it has worked for 37 years so far. Thanks for your read and feedback.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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The picture is great, the lady is beautiful. And this is a warming thought. Women all over the world would love to have a man feel this way. I wish your wife a Happy Mother's Day. You spilled your heart for your most desired woman. Thank you for sharing this lovely feeling from your heart and soul. And if it is fiction, you did a great job either way.

 Comment Written 06-May-2022

reply by the author on 06-May-2022
    Not fiction. Been married 37 years and feeling fortunately have not changed. Thanks for your read and your encouraging comments.