My Spirit Dream
My spirit wanders into the dreamer's dream.5 total reviews
Comment from aryr
Wow, you really spelled it out did you not, Jose. The picture was rather pleasant because I could definitely see the dream peeking through. Your words definitely proved that although your words showed we would play the Devil's tune, I firmly believe we are all savable. Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Wow, you really spelled it out did you not, Jose. The picture was rather pleasant because I could definitely see the dream peeking through. Your words definitely proved that although your words showed we would play the Devil's tune, I firmly believe we are all savable. Very well done, greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you, Alie. Sometimes I feel crazy
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Hey, Jose, It is okay to feel crazy every once in a while. You are so very welcome, craziness or not.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I am hoping that not too many people want to kill their neighbour and dreaming is okay if it does not hurt anyone else. Your dream is a mix of emotions here, I bet you were glad to wake up, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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I am hoping that not too many people want to kill their neighbour and dreaming is okay if it does not hurt anyone else. Your dream is a mix of emotions here, I bet you were glad to wake up, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. Sometimes I feel crazy.
Comment from lyenochka
Scary stuff, Jose! I think that's the view from this temporary world with a glimpse of how the evil one wants us to fixate on. But there's a powerful army of Light that is on our side. God will fight for us to save us!
Kill your neighbor stave your friend (starve?) Stave is a noun
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Scary stuff, Jose! I think that's the view from this temporary world with a glimpse of how the evil one wants us to fixate on. But there's a powerful army of Light that is on our side. God will fight for us to save us!
Kill your neighbor stave your friend (starve?) Stave is a noun
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you, Helen. I was born crazy. Thanks for the spag.
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Lol. Use the "crazy" to inspire your poems. Sometimes, the muse comes out that way.
Comment from irishauthorme
Yeah well, those muses! A blessing and a curse, driving us to better efforts and driving us crazy.
This work is actually a pretty good description of the human race as a whole, we have been killing each other since before and after we evolved, or were created, whichever you prefer.
So, Ying and Yang, if there is a Heaven, then there must also be a Hell.
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Yeah well, those muses! A blessing and a curse, driving us to better efforts and driving us crazy.
This work is actually a pretty good description of the human race as a whole, we have been killing each other since before and after we evolved, or were created, whichever you prefer.
So, Ying and Yang, if there is a Heaven, then there must also be a Hell.
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you, Irish. Sometimes my muse messes me up with craziness.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Your submission reminds me of John Lennon's "Imagine." Life is here, let's do with it what we can. We can, and should dream, for it is only by dreaming that we may qualify to 'see the Heavens.'
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Your submission reminds me of John Lennon's "Imagine." Life is here, let's do with it what we can. We can, and should dream, for it is only by dreaming that we may qualify to 'see the Heavens.'
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thanks, Gary. My craziness got you. :)
