Reviews from

Ted's Own Dilemma

80 Word Story contest entry

2 total reviews 
Comment from rspoet
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is an excellent story for the eighty word contest.
Most people really don't want an extensive answer
when they ask how one is doing.
Your story hits the nail on the head. :)
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you for the fantastic review, Robert. Yeah, some folks just don't care. Being slightly sociable is about the extent of their generosity. Lol.
    I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes, friend. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have a great rest of your day.
Comment from lancellot
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hmm, this is fine. Mostly dialogue tale. The ending is what most would think, maybe not say. Now, the story itself may pull too much on the reader's need to suspend disbelief.

I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Yes, I'm sure some care about this much. Lol. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Lancellot.