What Jesus Christ Fought For
Contest Entry2 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent story for the eighty word flash contest.
Many on fanstory will relate to the story and ending.
Explaining to children can be difficult, you've done well.
Best wishes.
Robert
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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This is an excellent story for the eighty word flash contest.
Many on fanstory will relate to the story and ending.
Explaining to children can be difficult, you've done well.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you!
Comment from lancellot
Well written and edited.
Jane is six years old, and she heard about Jesus her entire life.
I would remove this line as it makes the rest of the 'story' seem odd. Why ask such questions, when you've heard about Jesus your entire life. You would know.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Well written and edited.
Jane is six years old, and she heard about Jesus her entire life.
I would remove this line as it makes the rest of the 'story' seem odd. Why ask such questions, when you've heard about Jesus your entire life. You would know.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you!