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Sorry ... my mistake!

I was embarrassed ... (Third place, Story of the month)

26 total reviews 
Comment from jessizero
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Did you ever find out who was rearranging your posters? Or did it just stop happening? Thanks for sharing your story here. It was entertaining. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Hi Jessi, no I never found out. It just stopped happening! Lol.
    Many thanks for your review and good wishes.
    Wendy
Comment from WalkerMan
Exceptional
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We all make mistakes at times, and teachers are not exempt.

You did your best to immerse your students of French in the culture of France; so continually having to restore your posters to upright position was a nuisance, and finding them all upside-down was understandably beyond your patience. You checked the timetable to see which class had been assigned to your room when your class was not in session, but it had not been revised to show that the other class had been rescheduled for outdoor Physical Education in that time slot. You handled the resultant embarrassment well by apologizing to the students in the accused class, thereby both greatly increasing their respect for you and assuring that they would convince the culprit to cease the annoyance.

Thus, the episode ultimately benefitted all involved, and now has become a superb story for us to read. Brava!

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you for that. Yes, I will attend to it. Many thanks for your thoughtful and detailed review and encouragement. Always appreciated, as are the beautiful six stars. Feeling honoured.
    Wendy
reply by WalkerMan on 05-May-2022
    You are most welcome, Wendy. I see the change and have removed my comment on it, as is my custom, to leave you a clean review. You have demonstrated the value of honesty and humility in such a situation. Increasing mutual respect is always good.
    :)) -- Mike
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you Mike! That was so lovely of you. I always value your input. It's funny - I rarely use semi-colons, but I don't know why!
    Wendy
reply by WalkerMan on 05-May-2022
    The rules about semicolons are rarely taught, so it is no surprise that few writers feel comfortable about using them. I didn't know all the relevant rules until I self-taught on my way to my doctorate. However, the rules themselves are relatively simple, once you start using them. In case you didn't save my comment, I'll resend it to you in a PM so you'll have it for future reference. :)) -- Mike
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you! That's very kind.
reply by WalkerMan on 05-May-2022
    :))
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Yes, Wendy...this was a win-win situation and I am proud of you for apologizing to your students. You told this story well and kept my interest throughout the tale. Enjoyable to read and reflect on as you taught all of us a lesson in being graceful and thoughtful. I loved reading this and hope to read more like this.
Thanks, my friend!
Jesse

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you so much Jesse, and I appreciate your gift of six stars - a lovely honour. I am glad you enjoyed this one. I was thinking of you last night, and decided before I went to bed that I would message you today to see how you are going, as I hadn't seen you around for a while. I hope all is going well with you, and also your new carers?
    Thank you again.
    Wendy
reply by Jesse James Doty on 07-May-2022
    Hello Wendy. My story is too long to tell in a few words and I am afraid I would leave something out so suffice to say I am doing well my friend thanks for asking.
    I hope all is well with you too!
    Take care,
    Jesse
Comment from Paul McFarland
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An interesting story. I think you and I are on the same page when it comes to relationships with students. When I was teaching, I never passed up an opportunity to better my relationship with my students.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    I think that is very important. Teachers are human, and it's important for students to see that teachers model the same behaviours they expect from students. Honesty and respect - and no hypocrisy.
    Many thanks for your review. Appreciated, as always.
    Wendy
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This was an interesting build-up and recital of events, but I was left feeling frustrated as I never found out whodunnit. For me that detracted from the lesson you were trying to show us. Also, it felt a bit like having to give a mystery library book back before I'd read the denouement (that's why I nevr borrow such books anymore).

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you Kate for reviewing. I didn't reveal who did it, because I still don't know myself who did it. But my story was more about the mistake I made of making a judgement, and rushing in, and the need to make an apology - and the results of that apology. The guilty person wasn't germane to the story. But it's interesting to see what people want and expect from such a story - so thank you!
    Wendy
Comment from royowen
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The fact that you humbled yourself in front what most teachers would possibly think were a bunch of insensitive "callows" would be unheard, you and my wife would be the only two who would, marvellous thing. One should always apologise to their children, they are, after all, our equals, not in authority, but in God's eyes, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thanks so much Roy. Sounds like your wife and I are quite similar! I appreciate your thoughtful and kind review.
    Wendy
reply by royowen on 05-May-2022
    I think you are, I been trying to get her to write her memoirs, she always taught in lower socio economic high schools, interesting times for gentle ladies.
Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
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I really like this personal essay. You share your feelings and talk about the students with love. You must have been an exceptional teacher. Perhaps, with a teacher like you, I might have actually learned French! Thanks for sharing this pleasing story.
. "I had left them. I would put things . . ." This is a place where some kind of link (to show cause and effect) would improve the writing. (can be as simple as making it a compound sentence).

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thanks so much Kate. I?ll take another look. Appreciated, as always.
    Wendy
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
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I enjoyed this article for another part of your character it revealed. That is the way a teacher is supposed to conduct herself when she is wrong. I'm sure your students were very fortunate to learn with you as their teacher.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thank you Verna! What a lovely review. I did have an excellent relationship with my students. It was a mutual pleasure to be their teacher. I miss them now.
    Wendy
reply by Verna Cole Mitchell on 05-May-2022
    I wrote a short book of poems, REFLECTIONS OF A TEACHER, ONCE AND STILL
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. As of teacher for 26 years, I agree. I always apologuzed to my student when I was wrong. I also let them know that I didn't know everything and would continue to learn with them. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Lovely review. Were you an English teacher? I also told my students that. As I told them, no-one even knows the English language perfectly, so we don't worry if we can't learn a second language perfectly. The aim is communication with ease, not perfection. so I would say I was a bit further along the way, and as I would continue to learn in English so I would in French as well. I even put a big "L" sign at the front, the sort learner drivers have to display when out driving.
    Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved your story here and your students sound delightful. At least the culprits did not destroy your posters and I expect the students you told knew full well who did this to you. Glad it was all sorted and you were able to continue with your French classes. Bravo professeur! Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Thanks so much Dolly. Yes, my students were a lovely lot. I never found out who did the prank, but I don't believe they were in any of my classes. Thanks so much for reviewing!
    Wendy