Tanka Collection
Viewing comments for Chapter 47 "Evergreen Pines"Romantic Tanka Poems
17 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Oh, come ON! You did not just make this tanka into a pine tree! Wait, yes you did! There ought to be ten extra stars to award for very cool creativity... Love the "read" but the overall effect is mind-blowing...
"stitch a quilt of needles" ~~ SO GOOD!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Oh, come ON! You did not just make this tanka into a pine tree! Wait, yes you did! There ought to be ten extra stars to award for very cool creativity... Love the "read" but the overall effect is mind-blowing...
"stitch a quilt of needles" ~~ SO GOOD!
Karenina
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 08-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Karenina. Your enthusiastic opinion and detailed review are precious to me. I am grateful for your kind feedback, my friend. Thank you!
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
Interesting poem- interesting presentation shaped like a tree- with xxx- the poem is witty- about evergreen trees - year round - wondering if they care about what season it is - good job
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Interesting poem- interesting presentation shaped like a tree- with xxx- the poem is witty- about evergreen trees - year round - wondering if they care about what season it is - good job
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thank you, AP :) hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your tanka - the presentation is spectacular! So creative and pretty - it adds an extra dimension to your work.
Your words are very well chosen - descriptive and stirring the senses.
I like the personification of the pines and your lovely touches of alliteration throughout.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your tanka - the presentation is spectacular! So creative and pretty - it adds an extra dimension to your work.
Your words are very well chosen - descriptive and stirring the senses.
I like the personification of the pines and your lovely touches of alliteration throughout.
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem. A very breathtaking presentation as always. Very well done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Very well done.
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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This is a beautifully written poem. A very breathtaking presentation as always. Very well done. Beautiful photo to compliment your words. Very well done.
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and exceptional review. I really appreciate your six stars!
Gypsy hugs
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Your welcome 🙂
Comment from Marienkiefer
Hello,
This is my first opportunity to review your work.I chose this one as I find it an astounding piece for the following reasons, that seem also to speak to your strengths:
-Layout and presentation,
-Focus on energy of trees, patterns and fractals in nature,
-Nicely scented poem, olfactory notes,
-Movement and variation in wind, for example,
-Crisp, clear, effervescent word choices.
-Superb artistry and skill.
A pleasure to read and absorb its messages.Have a nice day.
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Hello,
This is my first opportunity to review your work.I chose this one as I find it an astounding piece for the following reasons, that seem also to speak to your strengths:
-Layout and presentation,
-Focus on energy of trees, patterns and fractals in nature,
-Nicely scented poem, olfactory notes,
-Movement and variation in wind, for example,
-Crisp, clear, effervescent word choices.
-Superb artistry and skill.
A pleasure to read and absorb its messages.Have a nice day.
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Marien. I appreciate your kind review and detailed feedback.
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My pleasure🙂
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture of the majestic pines in the foggy mist, Gypsy. I could smell the minty myrrh of those trees through the gentle winds. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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What a beautiful picture of the majestic pines in the foggy mist, Gypsy. I could smell the minty myrrh of those trees through the gentle winds. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Aryr, for your time and kind review. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The most magnificent pines I ever saw in my life was on the border of France with Switzerland, it was winter and the scene was magnificent. You brought the pines to life here and I love the picture you have drawn here both visually and spiritually, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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The most magnificent pines I ever saw in my life was on the border of France with Switzerland, it was winter and the scene was magnificent. You brought the pines to life here and I love the picture you have drawn here both visually and spiritually, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
This is such a lovely shape tanka poem! And I like how you describe the appearance (quilt) and then the smell (minty myrrh) and end with the sensation of autumn's coolness.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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This is such a lovely shape tanka poem! And I like how you describe the appearance (quilt) and then the smell (minty myrrh) and end with the sensation of autumn's coolness.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. I'm glad you like it :) it was fun to write.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Very nice presentation! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very nice and well written Tanka poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and beautiful imagery from the art work you chose. Very nice presentation! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review,
Teri .
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great shape poem/tanka, Gypsy.
I really like the image, but your shape in
words and symbols is great, too. Your
words were well thought out with great
imagery. Your poem is beautifully presented.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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This is a great shape poem/tanka, Gypsy.
I really like the image, but your shape in
words and symbols is great, too. Your
words were well thought out with great
imagery. Your poem is beautifully presented.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review, Jan.
Gypsy hugs