Hangover Buzz
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Comment from Susan Newell
Lord,
What a funny little poem. I liked the use of "bumbling" -- very clever. Overindulgence does indeed have consequences. We used to have a cherry tree in our dogs' fenced yard. The dropped cherries would ferment and the dogs would eat them. There was some stumbling involved.
Sue
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Lord,
What a funny little poem. I liked the use of "bumbling" -- very clever. Overindulgence does indeed have consequences. We used to have a cherry tree in our dogs' fenced yard. The dropped cherries would ferment and the dogs would eat them. There was some stumbling involved.
Sue
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
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Comment from rtadams2
Clever word choices, but not so obscured the reader misses it. You challenge us to keep up with your thoughts, which also makes it fun. Title is a good roadmap. Enjoyed the humor.
I was "really buzzed."
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Clever word choices, but not so obscured the reader misses it. You challenge us to keep up with your thoughts, which also makes it fun. Title is a good roadmap. Enjoyed the humor.
I was "really buzzed."
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
Comment from jessizero
I personally would add a comma after "kite," because now it reads like the kite is drunk on nectar. However, I understand a lot of poets don't use punctuation, and that's your choice. I did enjoy the poem. It was fun.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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I personally would add a comma after "kite," because now it reads like the kite is drunk on nectar. However, I understand a lot of poets don't use punctuation, and that's your choice. I did enjoy the poem. It was fun.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
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Thank you, I do appreciate your comments.
John
