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Acronyms

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Comment from Liz O'Neill
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These sure go together: "Particular
Timing
Involving
Only
Newness"

I'm going out to cut some dandelion greens just about the bud not yet opened. Timing is important to get them just right just as your poem speaks of.


 Comment Written 11-May-2022


reply by the author on 13-May-2022
    Thanks so much for your warm review and continued encouragement.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
reply by Liz O'Neill on 13-May-2022
    ***smile***
Comment from irishauthorme
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Hey, a lot of thought went into this acrostic! There are many messages here for those who would 'read between the lines!'
Your last three letters, "Involving Only Newness," is a prime example of the general public's fascination with anything new, particularly new fads.
I could give many examples, new movies, Marvel Comics, and the incredible Hula Hoop!
From our first awareness, we seek many things; wealth, companionship, admiration from our peers, a way to justify our abuses, enjoyment, and satisfaction.
Later, and sometimes too late for those who excess, we undertake the most important search of our life: Finding Ourselves.
Very good work, glad to see you posting!
irish

 Comment Written 05-May-2022


reply by the author on 05-May-2022
    Hey irish, I appreciate your continued support in the galaxy of stars!
    If you'll notice, the third fourth and then third and 8 th lines rhyme, so there was some symmetry and balance to this also.
    Thanks again!

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from lyenochka
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Good to see you back, Darren. I like your brief acrostic poem which shows us that struggle dealing with the material world and the spiritual world and reaching out to the newness of real life in the Lord.
Interesting use of different serif and san serif fonts.

 Comment Written 04-May-2022


reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thank you, helen, I really appreciate your warm comments and your personal perspective.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
Comment from Sally Law
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Hello there, Badger! So good to see you and read this. A lovely offering in acrostic form, beautifully penned and illustrated.

Sending you my best today as always,
Sally :))

 Comment Written 04-May-2022


reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thanks so much sally, I appreciate your warm review and continued encouragement.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger
reply by Sally Law on 05-May-2022
    You are most welcome!