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Super stepdad

Mom and me are so happy now

8 total reviews 
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Awe, that's so sweet! Kind of tugs on the heartstrings of even old gruff suckers like me. But don't tell anyone, and spoil my image. LOL. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2022


reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thanks Ric. Have a nice evening. X
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thanks Ric. I don't write such sloppy shit usually but it seems that '

    Thanks Rk .

    Thanks a lot Ric. Have a nice evening. X



reply by Ric Myworld on 04-May-2022
    It just means you're versatile. There's more than one side to all of us. Otherwise, we would be boring. LOL. Stay safe and healthy!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Our true Fathers are those who have nurtured us and not those who biologically created us. A step Dad can make a child's life magical with their care and consideration, you paid tribute to a true Father here, a fine 3 liner, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-May-2022


reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thank you so much Dolly. So glad you liked it. X
Comment from lyenochka
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You met the contest requirements perfectly and show us that a step parent can really do more than fill the shoes of a missing parent but bring the needed love and security a child needs. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 04-May-2022
    Thank you so much Helen.
Comment from Sugarray77
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How precious this is, Jen. The wonderful photo melts my heart and then I read your poignant verse that explains all of the history and now.. fulfilled dreams of the little one. Very nice and I wish you luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-May-2022
    Thank you so much Melissa. X
Comment from Commissioner Flanagan
Exceptional
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The poet exudes the value and importance of Fatherhood. The poet shares her inner feelings about not having a Father and provides a comparative analysis of having a Father.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-May-2022
    Thank you so much for the great review and shiny stars. Much appreciated. Jen.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
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This is a great post. And the picture is great, it goes perfectly with the poem. There are many people who did not have parents. And I hate saying this, sometimes they are better off. Some people should not be parents. Kids are getting killed everyday from being murdered by their own parents. Drugs are all around. It is shameful. Your story is heartfelt.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-May-2022
    Thank you so much Carolyn. Much appreciated. Jen.
reply by Carolyn Dooley on 03-May-2022
    You are welcome.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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The way the child says, "I'm happy and glad," sounds exactly the way a child would talk. Nice story with just three lines, and the picture is adorable - I assume narrator and dad:-)

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-May-2022
    Thank you so much for your great review. Sorry it's fiction. Have a nice Evening. Jen.
Comment from jessizero
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This was sweet and adorable. I am glad your character found a father. You did a good job telling this story in just three lines. Congratulations, and best wishes.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022


reply by the author on 03-May-2022
    Thank you so much. Have a nice evening. Jen.