Almost Gone
Trying hard to forget her.3 total reviews
Comment from jaded831
Your words meant the most to me. It has many interpretations. One in the present washing away pain. It can also refer to time that eventually nothing matters. Whichever way you take it, it is a great poem.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Your words meant the most to me. It has many interpretations. One in the present washing away pain. It can also refer to time that eventually nothing matters. Whichever way you take it, it is a great poem.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you much for your read and encouraging comments.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Footprints in the sand at the beach are a great analogy for a relationship, a memory, slowly washing away over time. These short poems are really hard to write (I think), but you've said it all with these 8 words and the picture reminds us of what happens to those physical footprints.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Footprints in the sand at the beach are a great analogy for a relationship, a memory, slowly washing away over time. These short poems are really hard to write (I think), but you've said it all with these 8 words and the picture reminds us of what happens to those physical footprints.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you for the read, review and encouraging comments.
Comment from prettybluebirds
It's pretty hard to find a lot to say about these short-short poems. I love the artwork you attached to the writing and it fits what you wrote about. I wish you tons of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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It's pretty hard to find a lot to say about these short-short poems. I love the artwork you attached to the writing and it fits what you wrote about. I wish you tons of luck in the contest. Nicely done.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you for the read, review and encouraging comments.
