Wanting More
a 15 Syllable poem36 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
This a perfect example of how so few words can affect mood, emotions, and scenic visions with the force of a novella. I read little poetry, but I'm glad we have crossed paths. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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This a perfect example of how so few words can affect mood, emotions, and scenic visions with the force of a novella. I read little poetry, but I'm glad we have crossed paths. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2022
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Hello Ric. I am glad you like my little bits of poetry. I do love to write in form and meter. FreeVerse is a bit of a challenge, as is prose, but I dabble with it from time to time. But, I must admit that after taking the FS Poetry classes, my perception of verse improved.. a lot! Thanks so much!
Melissa
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Sugarray!
Love the artwork and your wee poem.
Never been a person to say much .. then 8 months after my father s passing I started to think in rhyme.
Crazy , I know.
I started writing wee poems in July 2018 . I must say over this short lapse of time , I have began to enjoy this art.
It grew on me .
Keep safe!
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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Ciao Sugarray!
Love the artwork and your wee poem.
Never been a person to say much .. then 8 months after my father s passing I started to think in rhyme.
Crazy , I know.
I started writing wee poems in July 2018 . I must say over this short lapse of time , I have began to enjoy this art.
It grew on me .
Keep safe!
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 22-May-2022
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I really appreciate your lovely comments, Franca. Ciao, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Melissa,
What a beautiful picture. We all wish we could enjoy more of this beauty.
Poetry allows us to do that. We look for beauty to write about.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Melissa,
What a beautiful picture. We all wish we could enjoy more of this beauty.
Poetry allows us to do that. We look for beauty to write about.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you so very much Joan. I hope you are having a lovely day as we go into this weekend. Hugs!
Melissa
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
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You are most kindly welcome, Melissa.
Joan
Comment from Charity Stewart
Poetry is therapy and a positive addiction. It helps heals, release emotions and hidden truth. It also helps others. The image you chosen is beautiful. Love it
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Poetry is therapy and a positive addiction. It helps heals, release emotions and hidden truth. It also helps others. The image you chosen is beautiful. Love it
Comment Written 11-May-2022
reply by the author on 11-May-2022
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Thanks so much Charity. :)
Melissa
Comment from Whitewave
An unquenchable thirst for the beauty within poetry is born from an unquenchable thirst for the magic and mystery of life. Never enough is a wonderful thing because we remain ever open to more and the ability to share with others the constant flow of blessings we receive. Your words and picture do this perfectly.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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An unquenchable thirst for the beauty within poetry is born from an unquenchable thirst for the magic and mystery of life. Never enough is a wonderful thing because we remain ever open to more and the ability to share with others the constant flow of blessings we receive. Your words and picture do this perfectly.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thank you so very much for your lovely comments and insight. I so agree with your take on this verse. Thank you.
Melissa
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Sugarray77, Lovely poetry sentiment and 15 syllables exactly.
This is a poem that many can/will relate to. Beautiful, tranquil
photo choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish
you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Hi Sugarray77, Lovely poetry sentiment and 15 syllables exactly.
This is a poem that many can/will relate to. Beautiful, tranquil
photo choice. A pleasure to read. As this is a contest entry, I wish
you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Thanks so very much! I really appreciate your comments.
Melissa
Comment from judiverse
Lovely work. The scene in the picture looks so inviting. So true. A great poem should leave you wanting more. Some poets, it seems, tend to write the same-old, same-old type of poem so it sounds like we're reading the same thing over and over. It needs to be something fresh. Your words flow beautifully and you near rhyme works perfectly. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Lovely work. The scene in the picture looks so inviting. So true. A great poem should leave you wanting more. Some poets, it seems, tend to write the same-old, same-old type of poem so it sounds like we're reading the same thing over and over. It needs to be something fresh. Your words flow beautifully and you near rhyme works perfectly. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs, Judi.
Melissa
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Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs, Judi.
Melissa
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Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs, Judi.
Melissa
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You're welcome. I liked your thought about poetry. judi
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You're very welcome. judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Janice Canerdy
These mere fifteen syllables are powerful in their message. The desire to write poetry is held deep within just as the desire to paint or play an instrument is deep within the painter or musician.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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These mere fifteen syllables are powerful in their message. The desire to write poetry is held deep within just as the desire to paint or play an instrument is deep within the painter or musician.
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hi. Janice. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
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Hi. Janice. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
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Hi. Janice. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a peaceful entry. I think that the photo contributes a lot to your lovely words. I would make the words green to complete the aura that you create. Or, have a green background and white words.
I like how you presented your fifteen syllables in a single line. This is a nice post. It could easily win.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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What a peaceful entry. I think that the photo contributes a lot to your lovely words. I would make the words green to complete the aura that you create. Or, have a green background and white words.
I like how you presented your fifteen syllables in a single line. This is a nice post. It could easily win.
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hi Debbie... good morning. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
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Hi Debbie... good morning. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
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Hi Debbie... good morning. Thanks so much, my friend. I always value your insight into my work!! Hugs,
Melissa
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed this poem very much. It's well written and composed.
You have touched on a thought provoking idea of being content as writers. You have given your readers something to ponder. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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I enjoyed this poem very much. It's well written and composed.
You have touched on a thought provoking idea of being content as writers. You have given your readers something to ponder. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Thanks so much KL. I appreciate your insightful review.
Melissa