Colourful Characters Explained
Please read Colourful Characters first.8 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Colourful characters was thoroughly entertaining. Of course yes, it needed this post for the reader to be sure. Or maybe if you had just put the picture from this post onto colourful characters it would have been enough? Kate xx
PS I don't think you mean alliterative, but the real word is buried somewhere in the dictionary in my brain.
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Colourful characters was thoroughly entertaining. Of course yes, it needed this post for the reader to be sure. Or maybe if you had just put the picture from this post onto colourful characters it would have been enough? Kate xx
PS I don't think you mean alliterative, but the real word is buried somewhere in the dictionary in my brain.
Comment Written 21-May-2022
reply by the author on 21-May-2022
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Yeah, I did mean alliterative: Postman Pat, Bob the Builder... I was referring to the alliteration in their names. Like: Yasmine was yellow.
You're right about the picture, but I kind of do it on purpose. I like it to be at a riddle.
So you see, I write one of the types of flash fiction that I criticised before. My husband says when I think of something, I assume everybody else knows what it is without my explaining.
The funny thing is the only person who guessed the right answer. was a very good friend who also belongs to FS.
Have a great weekend
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Of course. And it all makes sense now, maybe you were just too creative for us readers LOL. It seems so simple now Heather, glad to know the end of the story. I know my grandies loved those ball pits, good to know the balls do too. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Of course. And it all makes sense now, maybe you were just too creative for us readers LOL. It seems so simple now Heather, glad to know the end of the story. I know my grandies loved those ball pits, good to know the balls do too. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Thanks for reading this little post, Valda.
Hugs,
Maria
Comment from Janetsue
I have always had a deep connection to colors. Yellow is my favorite because it is so cheerful. -- As far as postings, we have all posted things we wish had been expanded better, proofed more, or even re-written entirely. You have not given up and that is a beautiful thing to celebrate. I am very glad you are back!
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I have always had a deep connection to colors. Yellow is my favorite because it is so cheerful. -- As far as postings, we have all posted things we wish had been expanded better, proofed more, or even re-written entirely. You have not given up and that is a beautiful thing to celebrate. I am very glad you are back!
Comment Written 04-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Funny! Yellow is my favourite colour too.
I'm glad to be back too, but I won't have much time till July. The last term is the worst for us.
xx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Heather, and it's great to have you
back my sweet friend...
this was fun to read...I was stunned for
a minute...but it's about colors...
has to be the balls...
well done you...love your poem...and soooo love this
picture...great job...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Hi Heather, and it's great to have you
back my sweet friend...
this was fun to read...I was stunned for
a minute...but it's about colors...
has to be the balls...
well done you...love your poem...and soooo love this
picture...great job...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Hi Linda,
It's lovely to read you again.
Thanks for this review.
Hugs,
MJ
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always so welcome...and big hugs back at you...love xxoo
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ahh, now I see! Yes, it makes sense now you have explained it to us, Lol. I still think it was a nice bit if fun, and we all need that now and again, to keep us sane. Well done, Heather. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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Ahh, now I see! Yes, it makes sense now you have explained it to us, Lol. I still think it was a nice bit if fun, and we all need that now and again, to keep us sane. Well done, Heather. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 07-May-2022
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I agree with you. We do need to smile. I hope one day we'll be able to look back and see everything that's going on had a happy ending. A girl can dream...
Comment from Teri7
Heather, I am happy to see you back writing. I am sorry to say I did not get to read your work until this post. Thank you for explaining to us. I look forward to reading more of your work! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Heather, I am happy to see you back writing. I am sorry to say I did not get to read your work until this post. Thank you for explaining to us. I look forward to reading more of your work! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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I think I have just posted three things, Teri. None of them spectacular.
See you around.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from robyn corum
HK,
Intriguing! Brave. Fun. Compelling. Brave. Wicked brain work. hahahaha And brave. hahahaha
I think it was the start of something cute. I actually thought they were garden critters. The red angry, pushing guy coming through was the mower. When he clipped the nice Yasmine, she was kind and immediately forgave me. Then the nasty cruel weed eater cam zooming through the group with no care for anyone's parts or feelings. Bad manners for sure! Can't really remember the rest - but that's where my mind went. Thanks!
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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HK,
Intriguing! Brave. Fun. Compelling. Brave. Wicked brain work. hahahaha And brave. hahahaha
I think it was the start of something cute. I actually thought they were garden critters. The red angry, pushing guy coming through was the mower. When he clipped the nice Yasmine, she was kind and immediately forgave me. Then the nasty cruel weed eater cam zooming through the group with no care for anyone's parts or feelings. Bad manners for sure! Can't really remember the rest - but that's where my mind went. Thanks!
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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So cool. This is the great thing about imagination. There were obviously not enough clues and that's why I wrote this.
I love your take.Thanks for reading. x
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Where have you been? You're welcome.
Indeed, the objective correlative of your work reminisces a bouquet of colours with alliterative seasonings to match.
The work highlights in a twin perspective of photograph and words a colourful array of balls half engulfing a lone toddler cohering with the whole.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with the display of colours.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Where have you been? You're welcome.
Indeed, the objective correlative of your work reminisces a bouquet of colours with alliterative seasonings to match.
The work highlights in a twin perspective of photograph and words a colourful array of balls half engulfing a lone toddler cohering with the whole.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of anecdotes synonymous with the display of colours.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thanks for your nice review. I think I've been away for two years, doing an MA.
It's great to be back, but at the moment I have very little time to spare.
Will write more often when the school year is over.
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Remain Blessed.
