A Voice Calling
A caress is a tender touch of love.8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your Cube16 poem, Jose. I read it like a spiritual one with the tuning into the Lord's voice calling. We are all like ants or nobodies. But God's calling us makes us precious in His sight.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Great job with your Cube16 poem, Jose. I read it like a spiritual one with the tuning into the Lord's voice calling. We are all like ants or nobodies. But God's calling us makes us precious in His sight.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Thank you, Helen. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Comment from aryr
What a wonderful CUBE16 with a wonderful compliment to Robert, Jose. The picture is beautiful because it shows the ghostly implant over the flowers. Your words mean so much to both of us. And definitely you are not getting old.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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What a wonderful CUBE16 with a wonderful compliment to Robert, Jose. The picture is beautiful because it shows the ghostly implant over the flowers. Your words mean so much to both of us. And definitely you are not getting old.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Alie. :) If I'm not getting old, tell that to my aching bones. :) I'm glad you like it.
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LOL, you poor aching bones, okay I fibbed a little. Jose you are so welcome.
Comment from Sugarray77
Very well done, Jose, on the crafting of this CUBE16 verse. I loved the theme and could relate to it. We feel so small compared to the grandeur of our God. I really enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Very well done, Jose, on the crafting of this CUBE16 verse. I loved the theme and could relate to it. We feel so small compared to the grandeur of our God. I really enjoyed reading it.
Melissa
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Melissa. :) I hadn't written, didn't feel like it, but I have to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from R56Ma3
That was a very expressionable, I should say, and very well illustrated piece I have ever read. Very well structured with a good flow of words. I wish you the best in the contest! R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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That was a very expressionable, I should say, and very well illustrated piece I have ever read. Very well structured with a good flow of words. I wish you the best in the contest! R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, R56Ma3. :) I'm glad you liked it.
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You're welcome
Comment from Karen Alexandra
I really liked this poem. The imagery is beautiful and captivating, drawing you into the poem. The poem flows with grace as it follows the required structure. It is soft and kind in its intent and is a pleasure to read. So much so I read it twice! Thank you for submitting this for review and good luck with contests and future writings. Karen
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I really liked this poem. The imagery is beautiful and captivating, drawing you into the poem. The poem flows with grace as it follows the required structure. It is soft and kind in its intent and is a pleasure to read. So much so I read it twice! Thank you for submitting this for review and good luck with contests and future writings. Karen
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Karen. :) You made me smile. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
Lovely and haunting work that leaves to the reader whether the protagonist is hearing a call from God, or a future love, or perhaps a future child. And good work on the Cube16 structure, too. Bravo!
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Lovely and haunting work that leaves to the reader whether the protagonist is hearing a call from God, or a future love, or perhaps a future child. And good work on the Cube16 structure, too. Bravo!
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Sam. :) I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Very heartfelt words. A sweet way to express the longings of your heart. We don't soon forget the love of our lives. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with the group.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Very heartfelt words. A sweet way to express the longings of your heart. We don't soon forget the love of our lives. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with the group.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you, Rachel. :) Love is never forgotten. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiment here in your Cube16 which was invented by Robert Zimmerman. These poems are usually written in iambic metre, but yours is slightly uneven here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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I enjoyed the sentiment here in your Cube16 which was invented by Robert Zimmerman. These poems are usually written in iambic metre, but yours is slightly uneven here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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It did not say it was written in iambic meter, Dolly. I corrected it. I think. Thank you. :)
