Interpretations For Consideration
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16 total reviews
Comment from Heather Knight
I love this, Debra.
Your poem uses the perfect words to describe the little guy. Super cute, BTW.
Short, but it packs a punch.
And thanks for reminding me of lanturnes.
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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I love this, Debra.
Your poem uses the perfect words to describe the little guy. Super cute, BTW.
Short, but it packs a punch.
And thanks for reminding me of lanturnes.
Comment Written 07-May-2022
reply by the author on 10-May-2022
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Thanks so much, Maria!
I really appreciate your lovely feedback and generous star rating :)
He is a bit of a cutie, right?!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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Sorry it took me so long to answer. I wish I had more time to spend here. Now I realise that it's a lot more fun than the MA. And cheaper. Anyway, I loved what you wrote.
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Debra,
Isn't that something? ... Two-Face! This kitten's name has to be Harvey Dent! I'm thinking the picture must have been there first.
Thanks for teaching the Lanturne poetic form. I've never tried it.
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Hi Debra,
Isn't that something? ... Two-Face! This kitten's name has to be Harvey Dent! I'm thinking the picture must have been there first.
Thanks for teaching the Lanturne poetic form. I've never tried it.
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 06-May-2022
reply by the author on 06-May-2022
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Hi Kimbob :)
As with all the poems I wrote during the NaPoWriMo challenge, the picture came first! I just had to write a little something about this cute fellow!
Thanks for your feedback as always ;)
Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Aussie
Had a laugh at the photograph, was a treat that little face. All animal lovers would appreciate a half and half. When he grows to adulthood he would have made up his mind - at the mo' black and white what a fright! K xx
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Had a laugh at the photograph, was a treat that little face. All animal lovers would appreciate a half and half. When he grows to adulthood he would have made up his mind - at the mo' black and white what a fright! K xx
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello Aussie :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous star rating! I appreciate both and I'm happy that you enjoyed my poem!
Best wishes, Debra
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Welcome!
Comment from karenina
Purrfect choice! Maybe a kitten sign that all shades come together beautifully when we see with our hearts? Meow we know!
(I'd adopt her in a heartbeat!)
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Purrfect choice! Maybe a kitten sign that all shades come together beautifully when we see with our hearts? Meow we know!
(I'd adopt her in a heartbeat!)
Karenina
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Aw Karenina, what lovely feedback!
Thank you so much :)
I just couldn't resist the picture - too cute!
Best wishes as always,
Debra x
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True that! Adorable kitty!
Comment from Sally Law
There is no poetry to difficult for you, Debra dear. I put this on my list to try In the months ahead. A wonderful ending to the month; and I just know you will be recognized for your fine accomplishments.
Best wishes in the contest,
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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There is no poetry to difficult for you, Debra dear. I put this on my list to try In the months ahead. A wonderful ending to the month; and I just know you will be recognized for your fine accomplishments.
Best wishes in the contest,
Sal XOs
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Ah, thank you so much, Sal :)
I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thank you so much for your support and encouragement, especially during this past month!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Pam (respa)
-The image is too adorable, Debra.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective color imagery and good questions,
along with rhyme.
-I like the open ended closing, suggesting
you took multi-colored kitten.
-Congratulations on completing NaPoWriMo!!!
-You did a good job.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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-The image is too adorable, Debra.
-You wrote a good poem about it.
-Effective color imagery and good questions,
along with rhyme.
-I like the open ended closing, suggesting
you took multi-colored kitten.
-Congratulations on completing NaPoWriMo!!!
-You did a good job.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam, for your lovely feedback and message of congratulations! I appreciate both :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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You are very welcome and deserving of both, Debra!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Haha! As soon as I saw the picture I knew what the words would wonder - which shall it be, indeed! Plus, I love cats, so when I see a picture of one I have to dig deeper:-) Cute poem to match this cute kitten.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Haha! As soon as I saw the picture I knew what the words would wonder - which shall it be, indeed! Plus, I love cats, so when I see a picture of one I have to dig deeper:-) Cute poem to match this cute kitten.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Pam :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I found this poem about the tiny kitten very cute. And I wasn't familiar with the Lanturne form of poetry, so thank you very much for all this new information. Much appreciated. Kate xx
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I found this poem about the tiny kitten very cute. And I wasn't familiar with the Lanturne form of poetry, so thank you very much for all this new information. Much appreciated. Kate xx
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Kate :) I appreciate your feedback as always. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from juliaSjames
Oh this is the cutest kitten ever! Lovely lanturne poem, Debra. Sometimes it can be quite a conundrum to decide which side to come down on re the colour divide. Not to mention what happens when dealing with an issue that rouses strong feelings. A really charming write, especially with that perky "So" to finish it off with a flourish.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Oh this is the cutest kitten ever! Lovely lanturne poem, Debra. Sometimes it can be quite a conundrum to decide which side to come down on re the colour divide. Not to mention what happens when dealing with an issue that rouses strong feelings. A really charming write, especially with that perky "So" to finish it off with a flourish.
Stay safe and blessed, Julia
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind feedback, Julia :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Indecision
by Debra White
I love Ekphrastic poems and yours is super cute. Wonderful presentation. The picture is adorable. Good syllables count. I would get rid of the Word So ....but that's just me.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Indecision
by Debra White
I love Ekphrastic poems and yours is super cute. Wonderful presentation. The picture is adorable. Good syllables count. I would get rid of the Word So ....but that's just me.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so much, Gypsy :)
Best wishes as always, Debra x
