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Blowing dandelion puffballs to tell the time.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Yardier
Nicely done from the heart of an adult who remembers the simple innocent times of youth. The photo is the perfect backdrop for the emotion of the poem.
Good luck in the contest. Yard.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
Thanks for your review. I doubt many kids these days would be bothered to pluck dandelions and play with them - too busy playing games on devices indoors.
Comment from
zanya
Oh yes such beautiful childhood fun and happiness - let's hope children still get to enjoy such wholesome fun - and a lovely pic to illustrate -thanks for sharing
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
It seems that a lot of modern childhood time is spent in darkened rooms doing video gaming - the kids miss out on so much by not being outside in nature.
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