Ugly
Russia??s Invasion7 total reviews
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
Oh, how I wish this didn't stand true. I wish for world peace and that you yourself can find peace within yourself. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hello!
Oh, how I wish this didn't stand true. I wish for world peace and that you yourself can find peace within yourself. Thank you for sharing! I hope you continue to share your work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my work
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Pupa, it's good to see you in print. It's nice to see a lovely photo of you. I've been thinking about you. I was off FS for a while myself. Basically, I just returned. Still trying to find my muse.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear ~ soulful.
Of special note:
Total Humiliation
To our Humanity
(So very, very true. Good alliteration too.)
Profound photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hello Pupa, it's good to see you in print. It's nice to see a lovely photo of you. I've been thinking about you. I was off FS for a while myself. Basically, I just returned. Still trying to find my muse.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear ~ soulful.
Of special note:
Total Humiliation
To our Humanity
(So very, very true. Good alliteration too.)
Profound photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you. Great to meet you again here.
Comment from Eunice Amero
You want to say that again. Its awful. Wish there hadnt been so many kill. Was is nasty. A good poem. You know l would never dare go to war. Them men go through a lot. Good luck.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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You want to say that again. Its awful. Wish there hadnt been so many kill. Was is nasty. A good poem. You know l would never dare go to war. Them men go through a lot. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you for reviewing my work
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you are welcome
Comment from R56Ma3
How very, very true. There are times I just don't want to watch to news. Very horrible and inhumane. A very good description of what is going on. Thank you for sharing this. R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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How very, very true. There are times I just don't want to watch to news. Very horrible and inhumane. A very good description of what is going on. Thank you for sharing this. R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you, most appreciated..
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You're welcome
Comment from LovnPeace
Hello Pupa. I agree with your sentiment, Very well expessed. First time seeing your picture. Pretty lady, and Long time sibce I saw your work. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Barbara
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Hello Pupa. I agree with your sentiment, Very well expessed. First time seeing your picture. Pretty lady, and Long time sibce I saw your work. Good luck in the contest. Blessings, Barbara
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Nice to meet you again Barbara. Thanks a lot.
Comment from Inky Cat
Thank you for sharing this, I agree that war is evil, ugly and is a humiliation to our humanity. That is a good way of putting it.
The image is perfect too.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you for sharing this, I agree that war is evil, ugly and is a humiliation to our humanity. That is a good way of putting it.
The image is perfect too.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you, most appreciated
Comment from Chris Davis
Great tanka! Well versed on the ugliness of war especially this day and age. I am glad you took to words to express such sentiments and hope that most that read it will share the same view. If not, at least they might be prompted to think. Thank you.
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Great tanka! Well versed on the ugliness of war especially this day and age. I am glad you took to words to express such sentiments and hope that most that read it will share the same view. If not, at least they might be prompted to think. Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 05-May-2022
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Thank you. Appreciate your kind review.
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Thank you. Appreciate your kind review.
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