Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I enjoy looking at old photo albums too - much more satisfying than scrolling on a phone - and you have captured the nostalgic feeling well, where the past comes alive through our childhood memories.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

This is a great little poem and the middle line really adds to it. Photographs can be precious mementos. Well done and hope it does well in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Oops ! Sorry I did not read the rules properly. I thought 10 syllables. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards

reply by Sarah Tummey on 30-Apr-2022

No problem, and you did great with 10 syllables! It's so easy just to skim over sometimes. I rhymed something recently, then reread the rules and found it was supposed to be unrhymed.

Comment from Chris Davis

Good

Great start, but as I reviewed the poem, there were 10 syllables. I believe the request was 10 words, but will stand corrected if wrong. Take another look. Thank you.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Oops! Sorry I did not read the rules properly. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards

reply by Chris Davis on 30-Apr-2022

No problem. We all have our oops moments

Comment from Bloomer Burbs

Good

Hi author

Sorry to say but the rules state that you should write a poem with ten words, not syllables.
I'll update if you change it.
Take care, Pete

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Oops ! Thanks for pointing out my mistake. I will change. Thanks for your help. It is greatly appreciated.
With regards