Kimberly
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Comment from Sarah Tummey
This is a lovely poem. I especially liked the clever last line about onesies and tutus. A quick entry into the world and quickly growing up too, it sounds like..
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This is a lovely poem. I especially liked the clever last line about onesies and tutus. A quick entry into the world and quickly growing up too, it sounds like..
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Sarak, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from pome lover
I remember onesies. Sounds like you are a very proud and loving grandfather.
I have a picture of my granddaughter when she was about3 or 4, wearing a tutu, and holding a baseball bat (toy one). I treasure that picture. It is so typical of her.
This poem is lovely and ... it just dawned on me, but I think I'm wrong, that you were also making a little pun or fun with onsies and "two-twos".
Probably not. :)
Katharine
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I remember onesies. Sounds like you are a very proud and loving grandfather.
I have a picture of my granddaughter when she was about3 or 4, wearing a tutu, and holding a baseball bat (toy one). I treasure that picture. It is so typical of her.
This poem is lovely and ... it just dawned on me, but I think I'm wrong, that you were also making a little pun or fun with onsies and "two-twos".
Probably not. :)
Katharine
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
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Yes, I thought the transition worked .
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clever
Comment from nomi338
I am all agog waiting to see what she will do, when she reaches age three. Four, five and six, are also in the mix. Seven, eight and nine, she will be just fine. By age thirteen, she might very well be a dancing queen.
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I am all agog waiting to see what she will do, when she reaches age three. Four, five and six, are also in the mix. Seven, eight and nine, she will be just fine. By age thirteen, she might very well be a dancing queen.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
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By fourteen dodge a quarantine and at fifteen repaint the Sistine Chapel.
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She will be by all accounts a boss!
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I really liked this poem. What a clever way to show the growth of a child through the dance outfits she wears. "Onesies to tutus" is quite original.
And before you know it, she's waltzing in a wedding gown!
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I really liked this poem. What a clever way to show the growth of a child through the dance outfits she wears. "Onesies to tutus" is quite original.
And before you know it, she's waltzing in a wedding gown!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Hopefully -- twenty years from now.
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Smile!
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like the possible analogy for life here - dance/her life. I also liked the transition from baby to young child with the use of onesies and tutus. A lot is said in your 3-line poem. Good luck in this contest.
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I like the possible analogy for life here - dance/her life. I also liked the transition from baby to young child with the use of onesies and tutus. A lot is said in your 3-line poem. Good luck in this contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Pam
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
They do grow up too fast. One day an infant and next they are an adult. I like the picture and the story. Now she is a ballerina. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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They do grow up too fast. One day an infant and next they are an adult. I like the picture and the story. Now she is a ballerina. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thanks, Carolyn
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You are welcome.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Aw, that was lovely, and so funny!! Once in onesies now in tutus!! Brilliant wording and a fabulous poem for the three lined poetry contest. I wish you the best of luck! :) Sandra xx
I'll be back reading more Shorts, later.
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Aw, that was lovely, and so funny!! Once in onesies now in tutus!! Brilliant wording and a fabulous poem for the three lined poetry contest. I wish you the best of luck! :) Sandra xx
I'll be back reading more Shorts, later.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Sandra.
Comment from BethShelby
This is an neat entry for the three line poem contest. I get the feeling a lot of your poems are picture inspired. I like the play on words of onesies to tutus. Kids grow up fast.
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This is an neat entry for the three line poem contest. I get the feeling a lot of your poems are picture inspired. I like the play on words of onesies to tutus. Kids grow up fast.
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Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you, Beth. Kimmy is three today.
