Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This fifty-word story, Other World, has the required word count and reminds the readers that life outdoors is coming back and ready to engage.

Note: (Poured) cereal into a bowl with milk.

 Comment Written 03-May-2022

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reply by the author on 03-May-2022

Thanks for the read, review and the correction.

Comment from JoannaN

Excellent

Your text is so optimistic, and so is the accompanying picture. This description makes your reader want to join you on your patio. What I like the best it's the last sentence.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022

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reply by the author on 02-May-2022

Yes, I love sitting on my patio in the spring warmth with all the little friends who inhibit the backyard. Thank you for the read and the feedback.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Pouring cereal coincided with sunshine pouring in. How nice that you were able to enjoy this lovely moment to begin your day. When sunshine allows us to be outdoors there are many of nature's beauties to connect with... it's not just about us.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Thank you for your read and feedback. I love to be in the backyard when the weather warms and watch nature at work.

reply by LisaMay on 30-Apr-2022

me too!

Comment from T B Botts

Excellent

Hello Author,
Well done on your fifty word story. One only has to pay attention to the world around us to see what a magnificent place it is. I think morning is a great time to find a place by yourself, turn off the phone or computer and just listen. Great job. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed evening.
Tom

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022

Thank you for your read and feedback. I love to be in the backyard when the weather warms and watch nature at work.