Happy Mel May Day
Celebrating two special days68 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Debi,
This is a cute poem which shows you love for Mel. Happy belated Birthday to her.
I like the way you cross out in-law. I feel that in-law shouldn't be used for those married into the family. They are just family.
Keep writing and stay heappy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Debi,
This is a cute poem which shows you love for Mel. Happy belated Birthday to her.
I like the way you cross out in-law. I feel that in-law shouldn't be used for those married into the family. They are just family.
Keep writing and stay heappy.
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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You are so very Joan! Mel is blown away by all the kind birthday wishes, as I am too! Thanks Joan for your lovely review and comments!
Love Debi & Mel : )
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You are so very Joan! Mel is blown away by all the kind birthday wishes, as I am too! Thanks Joan for your lovely review and comments!
Love Debi & Mel : )
Comment from rspoet
Hello Debi,
This is an excellent poem for your daughter (daughter-in-law)
I like the clever word play in the Mel May day,
and the fine use of the mono-rhymes.
If she has three sons, she certainly could use time off.
Nicely done with perfect picture.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello Debi,
This is an excellent poem for your daughter (daughter-in-law)
I like the clever word play in the Mel May day,
and the fine use of the mono-rhymes.
If she has three sons, she certainly could use time off.
Nicely done with perfect picture.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you so very much Robert, as we always love hearing kind things about the kids. I truly appreciated the very nice review and comments.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem and think it is a very good entry for the May Day competition. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem and think it is a very good entry for the May Day competition. Good luck and Best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Jen, you are so sweet. Thank you so much for your kind review and lovely comments. I sure appreciated them!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem. May Day is a fun day where you leave a basket of flowers as a surprise on someone's doorstep. At least we use to, but some people don't like surprises, so please let them know what the surprise is.....
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Like your poem. May Day is a fun day where you leave a basket of flowers as a surprise on someone's doorstep. At least we use to, but some people don't like surprises, so please let them know what the surprise is.....
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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LOL! Thanks so much Rosemary! My son used to always leave a basket at his one grandma's house and that seemed to always give her a smile.
Thanks for your lovely review and loved your fun statement about the surprise.
Comment from Jane Jane King
Cute Mayday poem. Especially like the line about sunshine when skies are grey. We all need someone like that in our lives. Is Mel your daughter? She's very sweet and gentle and pretty.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Cute Mayday poem. Especially like the line about sunshine when skies are grey. We all need someone like that in our lives. Is Mel your daughter? She's very sweet and gentle and pretty.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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She is my daughter in-law, but in my poem I scratch the in-law out. : )
She is indeed a lovely girl and I love her dearly. But thank you Jane for your kind review and lovely comments!
Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Cute arrangement for your poem- happy birthday to your daughter. Lighthearted and happy tone. Thank you for sharing your creation with the rest of the group.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Cute arrangement for your poem- happy birthday to your daughter. Lighthearted and happy tone. Thank you for sharing your creation with the rest of the group.
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thanks Rachel, She is my daughter in-law, but in my poem I scratch the in-law out. : )
She is indeed a lovely girl and I love her dearly. But thank you Jane for your kind review and lovely comments!
Comment from Haylee Hemphill
Hello!
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very sweet for your friend. I hope you continue to share you work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Hello!
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very sweet for your friend. I hope you continue to share you work with our community and others.
One Love
Haylee
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Thank you again & this one was written for my daughter in-law who's birthday is today.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the May Day writing prompt contest. Exceptional imagery and presentation. I love the picture you chose it's very nice.
Goodluck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Excellent entry for the May Day writing prompt contest. Exceptional imagery and presentation. I love the picture you chose it's very nice.
Goodluck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you, the picture is of my daughter-in-law and myself.
I really appreciate you kind review and lovely words
Debi
Comment from Tom Horonzy
We give our children all that we have and in return often have to wait a long time to receive dividends. Not always, and it seems with this daughter they have made you very rich in a family way.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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We give our children all that we have and in return often have to wait a long time to receive dividends. Not always, and it seems with this daughter they have made you very rich in a family way.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Since mother in-laws always get a bad rap, I'm proud that my son picked such a sweet girl, who I love dearly! I couldn't pass up an opportunity to write a poem for May Day, which was also Mel's birthday and have a little fun with it. Thanks Tom for your kind review and very lovely comments. Debi
Comment from karenina
OH, this one makes me smile big! I feel the same about my daughter (in law, I know, I KNOW)---
Isn't it a blessing to have such a fine relationship? It's really a gift to both of you every day of the year!
If this is silly, why are my eyes raining happy drops????
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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OH, this one makes me smile big! I feel the same about my daughter (in law, I know, I KNOW)---
Isn't it a blessing to have such a fine relationship? It's really a gift to both of you every day of the year!
If this is silly, why are my eyes raining happy drops????
Karenina
Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Since mother in-laws always get a bad rap, I'm proud that my son picked such a sweet girl, who I love dearly! I couldn't pass up an opportunity to write a poem for May Day, which was also Mel's birthday and have a little fun with it. Thanks Karenina, for your kind review and very lovely comments.
I caught, that you caught the line through in-law, as how wonderful that you feel the same about yours. That says a lot about you my beautiful friend! Debi
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Danielle is as much a daughter to me as my own... We are both very blessed!
