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Happy Mel May Day

Celebrating two special days

68 total reviews 
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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I love your Mel/May day. Too cute and a wonderful play on words.

Now, say this one fast: Birth~May~Mel~day. This poem is fun and a wonderful tribute to someone very important to you!

Much love,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Hello, sweet Rhonda, I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from lyenochka
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How fun! This must have been for a blind contest so I didn't see it before. Happy Birthday to your beautiful and precious daughter-in-law! Happy May Day, too!

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Hi Helen, I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from Dr. Nad
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Well, Debi, your creativity never waivers. This is an excellent poem to celebrate an excellent lady. With all that is said these days about in-laws and all the mother-in-law jokes, you've heard, I know your relationship is on a solid footing. Congratulations!

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Dan, thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
    Thanks for the lovely six stars too.
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
reply by Dr. Nad on 04-May-2024
    You're most welcome!
Comment from GoWiSt
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Is Mel your daughter/relative? Is that both of you in the photo?
Nice reading flow and uniform rhymes throughout.
Yes, I join you in wishing her a lovely, happy, thoroughly enjoyable Birth/May day!
Well written tributary poem to your daughter-in-law. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Dearest WiSt, I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
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Leave it to you to create that birthday magic!
This is only one of the reasons everybody loves you! You are you with a humungous heart for everyone in your life.
This is a fabulous poem for May-Mel-Day.

Thank you for reposting because this was posted before my return to FS and I never would have read it or seen the photo of them two beauties!

Enjoy this special day!!

John

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Oh John, I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem.
    I love her like she was my own, and she knows it. Sometimes when we are at their house, out of the blue I will give her a hug and say,
    "How's my favorite daughter?" And my son always gives me the weirdest. Look, like what about my two sisters? Haha!
    Thanks again, my little bro. Love, Debi
Comment from nancyjam
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How sweet of you Debi, to honor your daughter-in-law on her special day.
Nice quatrains with good use of mono rhyme for smooth flow and upbeat
mood. I hope you both have a beautiful May Day. Nancy

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Hi. Nangy I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from BethShelby
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Nice post to honor someone special in you life as well as the first day of May. I hope this means we have left the cold days behind for a while even though in the heart of south, I still have a heater burning at my feel. My house is like a cave with all the trees around.

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Hi Beth, you are as bad as we are here with our weather. It is so hit and miss. We did not need any more rain. That's MN for you.

    I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from Sally Law
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Aw, How sweet is this! I know you are close to your daughter-in-love as I am with mine. There's an extra special bond with the wife of our son we cannot deny.

Happy Birthday Mel, and love and blessings to you {{both}} across the miles. I'm sure cake and ice cream will be involved!
Wish I could be there!
BBB XOs

 Comment Written 01-May-2024


reply by the author on 02-May-2024
    Hello Sally, I am shocked that you didn't get this on the first time around.
    I thank you for the wonderful gift of kind words and for the nice things you said about Mel and her poem. Love, Debi
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This well-written, creative, exuberant poem resonates with me because
I have a son-in-law I think the world of. Aren't we fortunate to have have these lovely people in our lives?!

 Comment Written 02-May-2022


reply by the author on 02-May-2022
    Yes, but it speaks equally well about the kind of woman you are and that you made him feel love. I have two Sons in-law that I love identically, as I do love
    Mel in the same way. Yes Janice, we are blessed! Anyway thank you for this very nice review and the very kind words. Mel and I both thank you!
reply by Janice Canerdy on 03-May-2022
    :-)
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a delightful and colorful birthday greeting and tribute to your daughter (in law), who is really a daughter. I especially like your created word, especially for her..."birthMayMelday." I wish you the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-May-2022


reply by the author on 02-May-2022
    Lily, as always, you are so sweet! Mel is having lots of fun with all the birthday wishes! So on behalf of my son's beautiful wife and myself, we thank you for your very lovely review and comments! They are so very much appreciated!