One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----I'm a big fan of both jiggling amble bosums and poetry that combines the two--call me a typical male drooler pig, but....I freely admit it!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----I'm a big fan of both jiggling amble bosums and poetry that combines the two--call me a typical male drooler pig, but....I freely admit it!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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LoL, okay, hello, typical male drooler pig.
Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate your kind review and feedback. Have an awesome present moment.
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Comment from Ulla
I loved this form that you have created, Marival. What an achievement! I read your poem a few times and every time it grew on me. I hope to try my hand on it soon. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I loved this form that you have created, Marival. What an achievement! I read your poem a few times and every time it grew on me. I hope to try my hand on it soon. Un abrazo, Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and feedback. Have an awesome present moment.
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Comment from lyenochka
Your poem is full of sensual references from the intoxicating aromas of gardenias (and jasmine, too!) and her "hypnotic hips." Another fun form for poets to try!
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Your poem is full of sensual references from the intoxicating aromas of gardenias (and jasmine, too!) and her "hypnotic hips." Another fun form for poets to try!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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😆 lol I don't know where that came from. It's my muses fault.
Thank you very much, Helen. I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful weekend 😀
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is a beautifully written pair of sextets. I find that your sweet blooms ooze tears of sorrow as well as scented perfume, that soaks Lady Jasmine's fine veil. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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This is a beautifully written pair of sextets. I find that your sweet blooms ooze tears of sorrow as well as scented perfume, that soaks Lady Jasmine's fine veil. Thanks for sharing. Kate xx
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review.
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Comment from Paul McFarland
You got me with this one, Gypsy. Probably like most men, I was drawn to the second stanza. This was erotic but not overdone. Okay, okay, the elm tree was good, too.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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You got me with this one, Gypsy. Probably like most men, I was drawn to the second stanza. This was erotic but not overdone. Okay, okay, the elm tree was good, too.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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LOL .... I don't know where that came from. It's my muses fault.
Thank you very much, Paul. I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful weekend 😀
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Comment from Rachel Jamerson1
Great job! I am not very familiar with this type of poem, but you did a good job. Not only did you follow the rules, but created and interesting story while doing so. Thanks
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Great job! I am not very familiar with this type of poem, but you did a good job. Not only did you follow the rules, but created and interesting story while doing so. Thanks
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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I created this form :)
Thank you very much, Rachel. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars. Have a wonderful weekend 😀
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Comment from Heather Knight
It's great to see how brave you and other FanStorians are: creating your own new poetic forms. That's how the world of literature moves forward.
I've read the poem twice, I love it, but I've never been good at poetry, most probably because I haven't made the effort. So why do I feel sadness when I read it and cannot see it if I analyse it rationally? Maybe I'm already tired or maybe it's because of the pic.
I'm beating about the bush. Wonderfully written as usual.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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It's great to see how brave you and other FanStorians are: creating your own new poetic forms. That's how the world of literature moves forward.
I've read the poem twice, I love it, but I've never been good at poetry, most probably because I haven't made the effort. So why do I feel sadness when I read it and cannot see it if I analyse it rationally? Maybe I'm already tired or maybe it's because of the pic.
I'm beating about the bush. Wonderfully written as usual.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Heather. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Happy Weekend. :)
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