Verse and Story for 2022
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "May Day"poems, stories
5 total reviews
Comment from R56Ma3
This is quite a fresh, just like spring time, poem. Flowers blooming, a lush green grass, and birds singing. I didn't know if you meant the squirrel skittered or it scuttled, but it was very pleasant. We all look forward for the nice warm weather. R56ma3:Susan C.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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This is quite a fresh, just like spring time, poem. Flowers blooming, a lush green grass, and birds singing. I didn't know if you meant the squirrel skittered or it scuttled, but it was very pleasant. We all look forward for the nice warm weather. R56ma3:Susan C.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Dear Susan, thank you for your comments and review. Dove P.S. The word in the last word was "scuttled."
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O.k. Got it, and you're welcome
Comment from Commissioner Flanagan
The poet exudes and expounds on the beauty and value of the birth of Spring. The poet aptly describes the natural effects of the first day of May and equates the birth of her brother to the birth and awakening of the Spring season.
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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The poet exudes and expounds on the beauty and value of the birth of Spring. The poet aptly describes the natural effects of the first day of May and equates the birth of her brother to the birth and awakening of the Spring season.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 04-May-2022
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Dear Commissioner, Thanks so much for your "exceptional' rating! and for your comments. Dove
Comment from SimianSavant
Haha just letting you know that "scuttled" may mean something very different from what you though. Unless you meant that the squirrel committed hari kari or jumped on a grenade or choked on a nut. Good luck in the contest. Best,
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Haha just letting you know that "scuttled" may mean something very different from what you though. Unless you meant that the squirrel committed hari kari or jumped on a grenade or choked on a nut. Good luck in the contest. Best,
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Dear Harambe, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I like that you tie new plant, animal and human life together in this lovely poem about Spring and new beginnings. You chose a nice rhyming scheme and the illustration - the colors and animation - are perfect for this. Good luck with your entry.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I like that you tie new plant, animal and human life together in this lovely poem about Spring and new beginnings. You chose a nice rhyming scheme and the illustration - the colors and animation - are perfect for this. Good luck with your entry.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Dear Pam, thank you for your comments, review, and good luck wishes. Dove
Comment from jessizero
I love your imagery and your rhyme scheme. It is effective and entertaining. Thank you for sharing your poem here, and keep up the good work! Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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I love your imagery and your rhyme scheme. It is effective and entertaining. Thank you for sharing your poem here, and keep up the good work! Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 02-May-2022
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Dear jessi, thank you for your comments and review. Dove