A Plagued Tale
50 Word story contest entry9 total reviews
Comment from Justin Chopin
Very clever. Thought the pun about " The dense frog advisory" was very funny. Glad that you were able to fuse elements of the Book of Exodus for your story and make them entertaining in a very modern fashion. Well done.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Very clever. Thought the pun about " The dense frog advisory" was very funny. Glad that you were able to fuse elements of the Book of Exodus for your story and make them entertaining in a very modern fashion. Well done.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Justin. I drive a truck at night and I've had this silly idea in my head, from driving in fog, for a while now. I was just waiting for the right contest to come along to put it in. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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You're welcome Dragon.
Comment from BeckyMann
I like humour in a story (because I think there is enough doom and gloom out there), and it is even more impressive when you can weave it into a an already existing/serious topic. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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I like humour in a story (because I think there is enough doom and gloom out there), and it is even more impressive when you can weave it into a an already existing/serious topic. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Becky. Yes, there is way too much gloom lingering around these days. I really appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from T B Botts
Hello Author,
Ah yes. I guess all the frogs came up from the Nile, but that wouldn't make as entertaining a story. One wonders at why pharoh was so stubborn, after all the plagues, but I guess God hardened his heart. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Hello Author,
Ah yes. I guess all the frogs came up from the Nile, but that wouldn't make as entertaining a story. One wonders at why pharoh was so stubborn, after all the plagues, but I guess God hardened his heart. Thanks for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
Have a blessed day.
Tom
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review, Tom. Yes, you think he would have figured it out a lot quicker. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have yourself a blessed day as well.
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
You are incredibly funny mystery writer! ,You hit it out of the park. Great photo, story was surprising and I'm still smiling! Actually, you have my vote!
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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You are incredibly funny mystery writer! ,You hit it out of the park. Great photo, story was surprising and I'm still smiling! Actually, you have my vote!
Comment Written 02-May-2022
reply by the author on 03-May-2022
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and support, Debi. Yeah, I like to throw humorous stuff in as much as possible. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my silly entry. Thank you again.
Comment from LisaMay
You've snuck your frog pun in very entertainingly. I enjoyed your story, imagining the Egyptians reading the weather news on their stone tablets while eating breakfast.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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You've snuck your frog pun in very entertainingly. I enjoyed your story, imagining the Egyptians reading the weather news on their stone tablets while eating breakfast.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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On their stone tablets, eating breakfast. Hahahaha. That's great. Thank you for the review and chuckle, Lisa.
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
Very cute. and now a bunch of dribble to meet required 150 characters. A few of ............ these, and some more of ?????????? because how a critque needs more for a fifty word fiction, I simply don't get.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Very cute. and now a bunch of dribble to meet required 150 characters. A few of ............ these, and some more of ?????????? because how a critque needs more for a fifty word fiction, I simply don't get.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Yeah, I don't know why we have to write long reviews for these. Gotta play by their rules though, I guess. I really appreciate the review, Tom. Thank you.
Comment from JoannaN
Wow :) A nice touch of humour. I like the contrast between the serious (biblical) beginning and the ending. The picture you've chosen fits well with your text.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Wow :) A nice touch of humour. I like the contrast between the serious (biblical) beginning and the ending. The picture you've chosen fits well with your text.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Joanna. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Well-written, and good use of your minimal word allowance to manage to write a whole plague and its publicisation in fifty words. The vocabulary you used was excellent.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Well-written, and good use of your minimal word allowance to manage to write a whole plague and its publicisation in fifty words. The vocabulary you used was excellent.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Katherine. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this silly little story.
Comment from jessizero
That last bit was so clever and amusing! I laughed aloud. I was expecting a retelling of a Bible story, but got this instead. Well done! Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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That last bit was so clever and amusing! I laughed aloud. I was expecting a retelling of a Bible story, but got this instead. Well done! Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Jessi. Yeah, I like throwing silliness in the ends of most my stories. Lol. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this ridiculous piece.
