One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from lyenochka
Enjoyed the lovely scene that you painted with your cinquain tanka. Love the moonflower picture, too! You cover the sight and sensation and sounds of this summer evening. Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Enjoyed the lovely scene that you painted with your cinquain tanka. Love the moonflower picture, too! You cover the sight and sensation and sounds of this summer evening. Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 16-May-2022
reply by the author on 16-May-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. I appreciate your kind feedback. Take care, Helen !!! I love the congratulations gif.
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Comment from Ja Majal
Oh my, this is fantastic, majestic...all of the above!!
Dark evening...summer rains......creek's whispers...
What a remarkable setting you laid down, enough to let the imagination fill in the blanks.
Beautiful.
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Oh my, this is fantastic, majestic...all of the above!!
Dark evening...summer rains......creek's whispers...
What a remarkable setting you laid down, enough to let the imagination fill in the blanks.
Beautiful.
Comment Written 14-May-2022
reply by the author on 14-May-2022
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Thank you very much for the exceptional review and six stars! I am grateful that you took the time to read my poem.
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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I like the fact about herons, I didn't know that. I like it. Perfect satisfaction of the line and syllable count and the don't rhyme consideration yet you tell an understandable story. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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I like the fact about herons, I didn't know that. I like it. Perfect satisfaction of the line and syllable count and the don't rhyme consideration yet you tell an understandable story. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. Have a nice day.
Comment from karenina
Such sublime eloquence and elegance in your words, your images, the entire presentation!
This one swept me off my feet, so of course it gets my vote!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Such sublime eloquence and elegance in your words, your images, the entire presentation!
This one swept me off my feet, so of course it gets my vote!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-May-2022
reply by the author on 13-May-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review. Have a nice day.
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You as well!
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I like this poem, particularly the last line where you describe the sound of the heron. Well done. I hope it does well in the cinquain tanka contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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I like this poem, particularly the last line where you describe the sound of the heron. Well done. I hope it does well in the cinquain tanka contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Sarah. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Happy Weekend. :)
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Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
I love this Cinquain Tanka with it wonderful images and delightful personification, especially the moonflowers hiding from the summer rain. The picture complements it well.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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I love this Cinquain Tanka with it wonderful images and delightful personification, especially the moonflowers hiding from the summer rain. The picture complements it well.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Verna. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Blessings to you too. Happy Weekend. :)
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Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem about moonflowers is lovely. The pictures are beautiful and add much to your work. It follows the guidelines while still flowing in a gently manner. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Your poem about moonflowers is lovely. The pictures are beautiful and add much to your work. It follows the guidelines while still flowing in a gently manner. Good luck on the contest.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for your kind review and feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from AP Apgar
I like this poem - it has excellent flow - tying together very well proving a clear - uncomplicated picture - which you only require a brief explanation for in your notes. Your presentation is also excellent providing a beautiful picture of the subject in a size that is easy for the reader to see! - and in balance with the page - also the written message - in balance and not unbalanced - if just realized how important this is - good lesson for my own future entries as well !!!! Good Job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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I like this poem - it has excellent flow - tying together very well proving a clear - uncomplicated picture - which you only require a brief explanation for in your notes. Your presentation is also excellent providing a beautiful picture of the subject in a size that is easy for the reader to see! - and in balance with the page - also the written message - in balance and not unbalanced - if just realized how important this is - good lesson for my own future entries as well !!!! Good Job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Hello, AP, it's always good to hear from you. I appreciate your exceptional review and six stars!
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Comment from Yardier
Exceptional on all fronts. The beauty of the Heron calling its mate coupled with the the elusive moon flower paints a gentle and peaceful picture of creation. It is a wonderful soothing poem.
All the best, Yard
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Exceptional on all fronts. The beauty of the Heron calling its mate coupled with the the elusive moon flower paints a gentle and peaceful picture of creation. It is a wonderful soothing poem.
All the best, Yard
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Yard. I appreciate your exceptional review and shiny six stars. ;)
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Comment from Janilou
What a beautiful poem this is. I wish you all the very best in the contest because this is superb. Your words came to life right off the page. Loved the artwork too. Thanks for the author's notes describing the call of the Herons.
All the best! You deserve to win.
Jan
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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What a beautiful poem this is. I wish you all the very best in the contest because this is superb. Your words came to life right off the page. Loved the artwork too. Thanks for the author's notes describing the call of the Herons.
All the best! You deserve to win.
Jan
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much, Jan. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.
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