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My life in parts.74 total reviews
Comment from karenina
It is heartwarming to read your lovely rhymed poem reflecting on the beauty of blessings which have enriched your life.
Your verse flows so well... I was impressed you accomplished this with varied line syllable counts!
Wise move to let marrying your wife be a crowning achievement!
Smile...
Karenina
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It is heartwarming to read your lovely rhymed poem reflecting on the beauty of blessings which have enriched your life.
Your verse flows so well... I was impressed you accomplished this with varied line syllable counts!
Wise move to let marrying your wife be a crowning achievement!
Smile...
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
Comment from HarryT
Wonderful flow to this poem. The rhyme scheme works well, adding to the easy nature as you walk the reader through all you enjoy in life. Indeed, the work provides an excellent picture of a wonderful, well-lived life. Grear job!
Only minor suggestions: climb to the top of (a) mountain/walked at the bottom of (a) hill. rode them all for (the) thrill.
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Wonderful flow to this poem. The rhyme scheme works well, adding to the easy nature as you walk the reader through all you enjoy in life. Indeed, the work provides an excellent picture of a wonderful, well-lived life. Grear job!
Only minor suggestions: climb to the top of (a) mountain/walked at the bottom of (a) hill. rode them all for (the) thrill.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
Comment from BethShelby
Good for you Willie. I love your poem. It sounds like you have had a wonderful life. I have a thing about not reviewing a poem that isn't playing the game by promoting your work. You are a wonderful poet and I've finally got to review one that was still being promoted.
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Good for you Willie. I love your poem. It sounds like you have had a wonderful life. I have a thing about not reviewing a poem that isn't playing the game by promoting your work. You are a wonderful poet and I've finally got to review one that was still being promoted.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
It sounds to me like you've had a beautiful life and to be able to write about it is an additional plus. This is well done and well thought out. Thank you, for sharing your wonderful life.
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It sounds to me like you've had a beautiful life and to be able to write about it is an additional plus. This is well done and well thought out. Thank you, for sharing your wonderful life.
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Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
