I've
My life in parts.74 total reviews
Comment from Jenifer Bellott
Thank you for your service in the military and police force. I enjoyed reading your poem. Like you, I favor rhyming poetry, and I found your rhyme scheme fitting for your content. My favorite line was, "I've saddled horses that were barely brokeAnd rode them all for a thrill." I look forward to reading more of your work. Warm wishes!
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Thank you for your service in the military and police force. I enjoyed reading your poem. Like you, I favor rhyming poetry, and I found your rhyme scheme fitting for your content. My favorite line was, "I've saddled horses that were barely brokeAnd rode them all for a thrill." I look forward to reading more of your work. Warm wishes!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
It sounds like you had a great life. Then you met your beautiful wife, fulfilling your every need. You can not ask for no more. Thank you for sharing your great story. Have a great day, both of you stay safe.
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It sounds like you had a great life. Then you met your beautiful wife, fulfilling your every need. You can not ask for no more. Thank you for sharing your great story. Have a great day, both of you stay safe.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
This is an uplifting and inspirational poem. Makes me want to get out and do things! There are a few lines with questionable rhythm, and I say that because it depends on the pronunciation of the words. I tend to clip words when reading, but if you read it in more of an American southern drawl, it does work. The imagery in the poem is amazing, and the rhymes work well. All in all, an excellent poem!
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This is an uplifting and inspirational poem. Makes me want to get out and do things! There are a few lines with questionable rhythm, and I say that because it depends on the pronunciation of the words. I tend to clip words when reading, but if you read it in more of an American southern drawl, it does work. The imagery in the poem is amazing, and the rhymes work well. All in all, an excellent poem!
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from JoannaN
I like your poem very much. Reasons:
1) content: it concerns an universal topic - life - and it very relatable for a potential reader,
2) structure. Repetition of "I've" was a good idea. This poem has a flow.
3) You ended the poem with a strong, optimistic ending.
Well done.
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I like your poem very much. Reasons:
1) content: it concerns an universal topic - life - and it very relatable for a potential reader,
2) structure. Repetition of "I've" was a good idea. This poem has a flow.
3) You ended the poem with a strong, optimistic ending.
Well done.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem. I enjoyed reading it.
The many examples of 'things' and places you experienced
were fun to read and think about. I like how they tell so much
about you. Your rhymes work well, there's smooth flow, and great imagery.
Respectfully, Jan
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You did a great job with your poem. I enjoyed reading it.
The many examples of 'things' and places you experienced
were fun to read and think about. I like how they tell so much
about you. Your rhymes work well, there's smooth flow, and great imagery.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Earl Corp
This should have been a contest entry. It rhymed, made sense, and made me remember a lot of good times. I've done all that stuff to except watching the salmon run. Very nice job.
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This should have been a contest entry. It rhymed, made sense, and made me remember a lot of good times. I've done all that stuff to except watching the salmon run. Very nice job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Sarah Tummey
I enjoyed reading this poem about your adventurous life. It sounds like you've travelled a lot. Just one suggestion: I would say 'I've swum', rather than 'I've swam'.
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I enjoyed reading this poem about your adventurous life. It sounds like you've travelled a lot. Just one suggestion: I would say 'I've swum', rather than 'I've swam'.
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Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Yes Willie, Life's Good and Love lives here.
That's all that matters. I have had a
wonderful life as well. It sounds as though
you lived it to the fullest. Well done! Nancy:)
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Yes Willie, Life's Good and Love lives here.
That's all that matters. I have had a
wonderful life as well. It sounds as though
you lived it to the fullest. Well done! Nancy:)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well done. Nice poem.
A life of excitement.
Good work - marrying the beautiful woman.
Don't stop now. there's more to see and do, surely.
Best wishes.
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Very well done. Nice poem.
A life of excitement.
Good work - marrying the beautiful woman.
Don't stop now. there's more to see and do, surely.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
Comment from Cecilia R
Your poem about a wonderful life is very uplifting. The images it brings through your words are clear and enjoyable. It is nice to see a positive poem when so many are of despair. Thanks for the moment of joy it brings.
Cecilia
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Your poem about a wonderful life is very uplifting. The images it brings through your words are clear and enjoyable. It is nice to see a positive poem when so many are of despair. Thanks for the moment of joy it brings.
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
