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My life in parts.74 total reviews
Comment from Karen Alexandra
What a lovely poem. You have captured the essence of contentment in the simplest but purest of experiences. To have found love that reflects a similar depth of beauty and your love for the best life has to offer is a lovely conclusion. Thank you for sharing this and every best wish. Karen
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What a lovely poem. You have captured the essence of contentment in the simplest but purest of experiences. To have found love that reflects a similar depth of beauty and your love for the best life has to offer is a lovely conclusion. Thank you for sharing this and every best wish. Karen
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Inky Cat
This has a beautiful flowing cadence. I felt swept up in the rhythm along with all those beautiful natural images. I felt happiness.
'And made her my wife' breaks the cadence a little- maybe that is intentional?
Thanks for sharing the beauty!
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This has a beautiful flowing cadence. I felt swept up in the rhythm along with all those beautiful natural images. I felt happiness.
'And made her my wife' breaks the cadence a little- maybe that is intentional?
Thanks for sharing the beauty!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Raul1
This is an interesting and unique poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
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This is an interesting and unique poem. I have enjoyed reading your piece of poetry. It is clear and concise. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a very good poem with vivid imagery
that paints a good word picture of your life.
-I like the contrast in each set of lines.
-It was effective beginning with the mountain
and "rapid waters."
-I also like the lines about the beaches and sand castles.
-A very nice tribute to your wife and very good closing lines.
-I enjoyed your poem!! Have a great day and weekend.
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Willie.
-You wrote a very good poem with vivid imagery
that paints a good word picture of your life.
-I like the contrast in each set of lines.
-It was effective beginning with the mountain
and "rapid waters."
-I also like the lines about the beaches and sand castles.
-A very nice tribute to your wife and very good closing lines.
-I enjoyed your poem!! Have a great day and weekend.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Lulube
great journey through your life's accomplishments and written with pride. You must stroll down memory lane often and just had to share your positive feelings and I'm glad you did. Might try to make my own list someday.
lulube
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great journey through your life's accomplishments and written with pride. You must stroll down memory lane often and just had to share your positive feelings and I'm glad you did. Might try to make my own list someday.
lulube
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, it seems that your life has indeed been happy and fulfilled, with plenty of wonderful experiences and a cherished relationship to enjoy life with. Beautifully written.
Wendy
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Yes, it seems that your life has indeed been happy and fulfilled, with plenty of wonderful experiences and a cherished relationship to enjoy life with. Beautifully written.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this poem. I found it very uplifting with such good rhyme and rhythm. It is so nice to look back on a good life. Cheers. Jen.
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I really enjoyed reading this poem. I found it very uplifting with such good rhyme and rhythm. It is so nice to look back on a good life. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Boogienights
I love this poem celebrating a life well lived. You have done many interesting things, but finding your wife, was most likely the best of it. Thanks for sharing. :)
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I love this poem celebrating a life well lived. You have done many interesting things, but finding your wife, was most likely the best of it. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from MissMerri
I thoroughly enjoyed this mini-autobiography Will. It says a lot about you and does so in a brightly colored array of words with elegant rhyme and meter. Nothing here to change at all. Just wonderful, delightful poetry. MM
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I thoroughly enjoyed this mini-autobiography Will. It says a lot about you and does so in a brightly colored array of words with elegant rhyme and meter. Nothing here to change at all. Just wonderful, delightful poetry. MM
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
This is well written, well constructed, and well presented.
It's written with a confident hand, one that has an abundance of stories to tell. Thanks for sharing.
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This is well written, well constructed, and well presented.
It's written with a confident hand, one that has an abundance of stories to tell. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
