I've
My life in parts.74 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, I've, points out several hard and easy activities which have been the days of one's life. The rhyme scheme was well done and moves the reader forward. Nice.
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This poem, I've, points out several hard and easy activities which have been the days of one's life. The rhyme scheme was well done and moves the reader forward. Nice.
Comment Written 01-May-2022
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
I believe you have had a wonderful life because you seem like the guy that works hard at everything you do to make things go better. You certainly have done a lot in your lifer and it's quite impressive. You did a great job on this and you should be proud. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
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I believe you have had a wonderful life because you seem like the guy that works hard at everything you do to make things go better. You certainly have done a lot in your lifer and it's quite impressive. You did a great job on this and you should be proud. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Terry Palardy
Very nice rhyme and meter ... sharing satisfaction and comfort with all who read this. I needed to read the positive message you've written ... Thank you.
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Very nice rhyme and meter ... sharing satisfaction and comfort with all who read this. I needed to read the positive message you've written ... Thank you.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Jane Jane King
This is a very sweet lovely poem, relishing the wonders and beauty of Mother Nature and the simple pleasures of life that we often take for granted. I think swum should be changed to swimmer. Beautifully written!
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This is a very sweet lovely poem, relishing the wonders and beauty of Mother Nature and the simple pleasures of life that we often take for granted. I think swum should be changed to swimmer. Beautifully written!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from nomi338
It certainly sounds like it. I have enjoyed some of the same thrills and chills, but sadly not as many as you. Still, I would not exchange any of my adventures for anyone else's. My life, not unlike yours has been full and filled with joy.
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It certainly sounds like it. I have enjoyed some of the same thrills and chills, but sadly not as many as you. Still, I would not exchange any of my adventures for anyone else's. My life, not unlike yours has been full and filled with joy.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from rspoet
Hello Willie,
You've written an excellent poem with very good rhymes
that tells the story of someone who's had a good life.
We've done many of the same things enjoying nature.
I don't think many people camp the way we used to,
cooking over the campfire, sleeping in tents.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
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Hello Willie,
You've written an excellent poem with very good rhymes
that tells the story of someone who's had a good life.
We've done many of the same things enjoying nature.
I don't think many people camp the way we used to,
cooking over the campfire, sleeping in tents.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from moongirlwriter
Yes, indeed. . .I would say you've had a wonderful life. Anyone would say you've had a wonderful life. I love the way your poem flows and the image you paint with your words. It truly does have all the elements for a wonderful life. . .and you've said it well. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Yes, indeed. . .I would say you've had a wonderful life. Anyone would say you've had a wonderful life. I love the way your poem flows and the image you paint with your words. It truly does have all the elements for a wonderful life. . .and you've said it well. Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from Lilly Flowers
What a wonderful, uplifting poem. It's so nice to read something so positive, especially in this day and age when there's so much depressing news. I enjoyed the rhythm and your choice of rhyming words. Best regards, Lilly
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What a wonderful, uplifting poem. It's so nice to read something so positive, especially in this day and age when there's so much depressing news. I enjoyed the rhythm and your choice of rhyming words. Best regards, Lilly
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a splendid write in its easy, smooth flowing rhyme - I thoroughly enjoyed my read and agree with you - you are having a "wonderful life."
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In my opinion, a splendid write in its easy, smooth flowing rhyme - I thoroughly enjoyed my read and agree with you - you are having a "wonderful life."
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
Comment from estory
The warm tone, the upbeat rhyme scheme and meter set up the framework for this celebration of the little moments that add up to a satisfactory life. The details in the scenes you picked up highlight the personal flavor and make this something we can relate to in our own lives. We've all shared similiar moments and so we can relate. estory
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The warm tone, the upbeat rhyme scheme and meter set up the framework for this celebration of the little moments that add up to a satisfactory life. The details in the scenes you picked up highlight the personal flavor and make this something we can relate to in our own lives. We've all shared similiar moments and so we can relate. estory
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
