Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell

Excellent

I love the picture here, as well as the words of this poem. The exuberance and the impatience of the puppy are seen clearly in your poem. I wish you good luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

I love it. Your poem reminded me of my own dog when she was alive. Your poem made me smile before coffee, a hard thing to do. The picture compliments your words. Together they make a great presentation.

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

He he he, dogs lick us to show affection and to obtain our smell, in this case the dog is asking for his breakfast as he shows his love for you, a fine write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Well done. Sounds like you wake up to love each morning! And you have to get straight up. Lovely 5-7-5. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2022

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

This ritual takes place a zillion times a day world-wide, save for perhaps where a dog is a delicacy. ugh. Good luck. ............................................................

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

This is my ritual every morning. She she's herself as dilicate but definitely not a delicacy.

Comment from Eliz T.

Excellent

So cute. In my opinion, one of the best ways to wake up is to puppies. Thanks for sharing. Question though, was the typo in the title on purpose? If so, what does it mean?

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thanks for you're review. Just wondering what typo you're referring to.

reply by Eliz T. on 29-Apr-2022

Breakfast Tme instead of Time.

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Whoops, blindness alert! Thank you.

reply by Eliz T. on 29-Apr-2022

No worries, you're welcome.

Comment from prettybluebirds

Excellent

This is cheerful and funny writing. I love the artwork you attached to your poem, it is so appropriate. The poem is well-written and should do well in the contest. I wish you tons of luck in the voting.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from John Ciarmello

Excellent

This is a great 5-7-5. They do keep us on our toes, don't they? Your few words are well thought out and placed. I wish you much success with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thanks for your review. Intrusion is not a word they care about

Comment from Bridge

Excellent

A very cute poem. One can easily relate to it. Very well described. Very well written.
Thanks for sharing. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

Thanks very much for your review.

Comment from Sarah Tummey

Excellent

This is brilliantly written. I don't have a dog and can't think of anything worse than being licked on the face, but you've definitely put across the puppy's devotion to their owner and their food!

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022

She usually has one thing on her mind..brekky!!