Thoughts on Jealousy
A double acrostic poem5 total reviews
Comment from Beri Bee
This is a wonderful reminder in clever form. Backwards or forwards it adds up the same and it's not GORJ! Thanks for the reminder. Afflicted men bid sanity adieu!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This is a wonderful reminder in clever form. Backwards or forwards it adds up the same and it's not GORJ! Thanks for the reminder. Afflicted men bid sanity adieu!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I don't know if I could wrap my head around writing an acrostic poem, but you have done an awesome job! Nothing seems forced or put in to meet the challenge. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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I don't know if I could wrap my head around writing an acrostic poem, but you have done an awesome job! Nothing seems forced or put in to meet the challenge. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an excellent double acrostic, except I think there is one grammar error in the fourth line. Lusts shouldn't take an S as it relates to men, not man.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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This is an excellent double acrostic, except I think there is one grammar error in the fourth line. Lusts shouldn't take an S as it relates to men, not man.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. Thank you for pointing out the grammatical error. It is greatly appreciated
With regards
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this fins you well. I like your Acrostic poem you executed well with your thoughts on jealousy. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Hello mystery poet a good day to you. I hope this fins you well. I like your Acrostic poem you executed well with your thoughts on jealousy. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
Jealous people suffer from feelings of insecurity and low self-esteem. It is a terrible condition. It stresses both parties in a relationship.
The person with the problem feels neglected. He or she wants all the attention. The situation is sad. Since birth, insecurity, abandonment, and abuse affect one's mind. Thanks for raising awareness.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Jealous people suffer from feelings of insecurity and low self-esteem. It is a terrible condition. It stresses both parties in a relationship.
The person with the problem feels neglected. He or she wants all the attention. The situation is sad. Since birth, insecurity, abandonment, and abuse affect one's mind. Thanks for raising awareness.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my work. It is greatly appreciated
With regards
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You are welcome. This was a great one.
