"Poetry from the Broken Heart"
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Again your writing makes my heartache for you. It is so sad that you had to lose your precious son in such a senseless way. Does it make it any easier knowing that some of your son still exists in others? I never had that chance when my son was killed and I just wondered if it helps at all.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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Again your writing makes my heartache for you. It is so sad that you had to lose your precious son in such a senseless way. Does it make it any easier knowing that some of your son still exists in others? I never had that chance when my son was killed and I just wondered if it helps at all.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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When you're going to the process of making that decision.
It will change your life for the better or the worst.
Fortunately I have great solace in the fact that two out of the four people wrote me letters and three out of the four people are still alive going on 20 years now with Jason inside!
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
You have broken my heart. My son passing on before I do is one of my biggest fears. And you express your thoughts with beauty and truth, when you have been through the worst thing a parent can face. Thank you for showing your vulnerability.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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You have broken my heart. My son passing on before I do is one of my biggest fears. And you express your thoughts with beauty and truth, when you have been through the worst thing a parent can face. Thank you for showing your vulnerability.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2022
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One of the other reviewers asked me if I get any peace by writing it.
Note it is apparents worse nightmare and it's a gift that keeps on giving.
Yes, but there's Peace by writing and knowing the fact people are walking in your son's shoes at this moment in time!
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky
Comment from catherine Jones2
Well, this is an unbearably sad little piece. Written from a place of terrible tragedy I would assume.
The last verse is particularly evocative I thought.
I do not feel as if I should comment on another person's writing from the soul, it is what it is. As you say,"Now you are reading from my broken heart."
What can one say to that line...
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Well, this is an unbearably sad little piece. Written from a place of terrible tragedy I would assume.
The last verse is particularly evocative I thought.
I do not feel as if I should comment on another person's writing from the soul, it is what it is. As you say,"Now you are reading from my broken heart."
What can one say to that line...
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thanks, and You actually grabbed it before I cleaned up the editor's Notes.
Go through it a second time and you'll understand more catherine.
Ricky
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Hi
I re read and I do understand more. Thank you for sharing and please accept my sympathy for your loss.