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Comment from Ric Myworld
Like everything else, you all won't miss the old home too much until it's gone, then its loss will come back to haunt you for many years to come. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Like everything else, you all won't miss the old home too much until it's gone, then its loss will come back to haunt you for many years to come. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Gah, I am not looking forward to that. Thanks for the heads up, Ric!
Comment from Goosey Gander
outstanding! Diatelles are TRICKY! but you did an amazing job with your poem, and congrats on the descriptive words!!! "graceful white trunk aglow in its splendor." Outstanding.
-GGG
<3
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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outstanding! Diatelles are TRICKY! but you did an amazing job with your poem, and congrats on the descriptive words!!! "graceful white trunk aglow in its splendor." Outstanding.
-GGG
<3
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2022
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Thank you, thank you! I do love that tree!! And I love YOU!
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Same here <3
Comment from Sally Law
This is a wonderful weeping willow in the weeping willow green! (I hurt my back/shoulder and I'm on meds.) Ahem... Anyway, this is stellar and not an easy form to do. Obviously, you are a master at many forms of poetry. Beautifully written, dear Mama. I ache for the house sale; but life goes on in rich memories.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest end, (You should be very proud.) I hope you publish this.
Sal XOs...
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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This is a wonderful weeping willow in the weeping willow green! (I hurt my back/shoulder and I'm on meds.) Ahem... Anyway, this is stellar and not an easy form to do. Obviously, you are a master at many forms of poetry. Beautifully written, dear Mama. I ache for the house sale; but life goes on in rich memories.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest end, (You should be very proud.) I hope you publish this.
Sal XOs...
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Oh, dear Sal, sending lots of wishes for a quick mend! This challenge has been just that--a challenge to get out of my comfort zone and try lots of new poetry forms. What fun. Thank goodness for our memories! Hehe, I had not thought about publishing! I don't even know how I would go about that. :) p.s. I love how you often change your profile pic!
Comment from lyenochka
It sounds like a lovely tree. And your diatelle is very well done. I never tried one and it seems more challenging than an etheree or a nonet with the required rhyme scheme! Congratulations to all on the house sale. I hope your mom will love her next place!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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It sounds like a lovely tree. And your diatelle is very well done. I never tried one and it seems more challenging than an etheree or a nonet with the required rhyme scheme! Congratulations to all on the house sale. I hope your mom will love her next place!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2022
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Thank you so very much, Helen. Mom is happy and looks forward to focusing on her new chapter. Sending lots of good wishes your way!
